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The Doctor laid himself on another table, taking extra time to make sure he was as restrained as Batgirl, then walked his assistant through the rest of the procedure. The assistant followed the doctors order calibrating the machine to his exact specifications
before throwing the power switch breathing life into the machine. Stray sparks shot out and the lights on the whole block dimmed, Batgirl and the doctor cried out in pain trashing around in their restraints as the machine did its job. The hum of the machine
died down and a silence returned to the lab.
"Well what are you waiting for unstrap me." The doctor said hearing his words spoken in Batgirl's voice. The restraints unclasped and the doctor rose to his, or rather her, feet. "I must say this is quite nice this body of yours. You keep it nice and fit."
The doctor said as he closely examined Batgirl's body.
"Stop that you pervert!" Batgirl screamed, she wanted to say more but her voice scarred her it wasn't hers this wasn't right.
"Your the pervert, an old man like you watching a young woman touch herself. Face it I'm Batgirl now all of your physical prowess, with my intellect, and a few memories of yours I decided to keep like your training and Bruce, and all your other little friends."
The new Batgirl said. The real Batgirl could only watch in fear as her weak new body was dragged away by the doctor's guards
"Now. " The doctor said zipping her body into the tight Batgirl uniform. "It's time to collect a few more test subjects.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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