A Brave New World

by Fanfic Fetishist
Storyline The Book
Characters Absolutely Everyone
Category Absolutely Everything
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    "STOP HIM!"

    The monks chased the lone, desperate man through the temple as he made his way to the sacred place.  Traps triggered, but the enhancements the man had bought from the Power Broker made him fast enough to dodge the deadly spikes, walls, and poisoned darts.  

    He needed to get to it.  It was the only way.  

    "Please!" screamed one of the monks.  "You do not understand the consequences of your actions!"

    The man knocked him out with one punch.  He didn't care about the consequences.  He just wanted HER to live again.

    Eventually, he came to it.  The sacred place.  

    Lying on an altar in the center of the room was a massive book, one which had the history of the world inside of it.  He went up to the book and flipped back a few pages, until he found the event he was looking for.  

    "Soon, my beloved... Soon, you will live again..."  

    He wrote in the book, the monks screaming in fear as they ran into the room with him.  

    "You're too late!" he said, laughing.  "Let history be changed!"  

    A bright flash erupted from the book, knocking the man out.  

    When he recovered, he found himself alone, the temple unchanged.  Worried that nothing had happened, he left the sacred place, heading for the surface.  

    No traps were triggered, no monks stopped him.

    Something was wrong.  

    He came up to the temple's surface... and screamed when he saw just how drastic the changes to the world were.  

    "No!  NO!  THIS IS WRONG!" he screamed.  "This isn't what I wanted!" 

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gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496

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