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(OOC: That...wasn't quite what I'd had in mind for Carol, which was that she's a submissive fucktoy who'll endure any humiliation to please her hubby; IMO doing the "turning into a fatso like her husband" once was enough. Oh, well.)
The Joker lifted the shapely metal foot of his robotic new paramour to his lips. Jocasta's voicebox produced a sound resembling a moan of pleasure as her lover suckled her chrome-steel toes. She began playing with the silicon orbs on her chest with one hand,
as he began kissing his way up her leg towards the orifice she had opened up between her legs...
Moonstone sauntered over to the bed, where lay her lover, naked and erect. Her eyes crawled over his short body, from the hideous face, to the oversized genitals that would be giving her so much pleasure. Other people couldn't understand what a statuesque goddess
like her saw in this ugly little man; they didn't understand that their love was beyond the physical, born by a meeting of their black hearts, their shared joy in fucking with the minds of others.
"I'm told that you suffer from a pathological hatred of women," she purred. "Let's see if I can fix that..."
She slowly, sensuously pulled off her top, and then crawled on to the bed....
The Leader sat on his throne, a huge smile on his face as the daughter of his greatest enemy knelt before him, her green skin completely bare.
"Please, my Leader, permit me to suck your cock?" Begged Lyra, Daughter of Hulk...
Thundra roared her pleasure as she rode her stone-faced new boytoy, exulting in both the pleasure of sex and the conquest of a powerful man. For his part, the Lord of Apokolips lay quiescent, content to follow the dictates of the woman who had revived his cold
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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