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The Melder takes out those who could stop him.

by burke_rakers
Storyline The Body-Melding Ray
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Doctor Strange was puzzled about the feelings he'd been having. There were beings and gods abroad tonight...but this was different. Worse, in its own way. Unconnected to any other seeming plans or motive, a single entity armed with a powerful magical device was probing...flitting...sneaking about, with only random tracings to suggest his passing. There were many entities that he kept an eye on in his capacity as Sorcerer Supreme of Earth, but this one was new...

...and coming.

Stephen Strange prepared himself for battle, but the man who entered his home (impossible) was wrapped in layers of imposing magical protection. Strange couldn't actually see the man/woman/whatever, but he knew this was a dangerous situation. The entity moved...and his magical protections rippled....flowed...exposing him real appearance for a momant. "Are you Stephen Strange? THE Doctor Stephen Strange?"

"Yes. And to whom am I speaking?"

"Oh, I'm strange too...in my own way. Sometimes called one name, and sometimes another. I don't look it, but I'm a being of ancient, primordial chaos. Wanna see?"

Doctor Strange began to cast a counterspell, but the being leveled the Melding Wand at him...

(later)

It was so hard to piece together. He'd seen the being...felt the Wand strike him, and heard his/her say "I've got to get you out of the way, Strange. This world is so boring...mundane...ordinary, that I simply MUST shake it up and make the dust fly. You won't remember me when I'm done...but I've aquired the life of a ordinary, basic criminal using my Melding Wand...and I'm melding her with you. Once I'm done, you and she will be a single being...but her desires and opinions will dominate you. You'll still basicly be yourself...but with an added twist. Won't that be fun? I knew you'd understand."

And she did...sort of. She knew she was a Sorcerer. She was a Doctor, for pity sakes...but...she also knew she was a sexy sneak thief. A professional cat burgler. She was...Felicia Strange...also called The Black Cat. She could remember being the daughter of a thief...then being a doctor...the accident...the Anciant One...and eventually using her magic to become the worlds most infamous thief. She looked at herself in the mirror...and saw a slinky, sexy platinum blond dressed in her skintight black costume, white fur accents...the Eye of Agamotto at her throat. Her Cloak of Levitation was the old, dark blue one with the high collar...because it blended well with the dark. The Eye of Agamotto told her where the security devices were...she floated through the room, cast a spell...and the safe opened. She giggled as she filled her bag with gems and jewelery, leaving the cash which didn't unterest her much. Then she tossed a small card "You've been robbed by the Black Cat...meow, darlings" it said. As she floated from the window, she hoped that dishy hunk Spiderman was out looking for her tonight.


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colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.
Evva - 7/17/2017 6:33 AM
cool
extreme1 - 7/16/2017 10:26 PM
Evva, I can read it fine.
Evva - 7/16/2017 9:20 PM
Guys, can you read my chapter clearly? http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=334884



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