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"Dat Colossus sure got a big ol' dick for a honky," Emalu Coal said as she rubbed her crotch. "Uh-huh, dat big white piece o' meat sure would be nice in mah big black twat."
"Hey, leave your big paws off him!" Kitty yelled.
"You talkin' back tah me, ho?" Kitty took a step back as the huge, powerful black woman lumbered towards her. "No skinny white bitch gonna tell de Big Black Queen what tah do!"
* * *
The door to the mansion burst open and Charlize and Emma Xavier sashayed in, hand-in-hand, their svelte teen bodies gleaming with many of their new fashion purchases: gleaming jewellery, super-chic outfits, platform shoes worth more than some people make in
half a year.
Behind them came a couple of beefy students, staggering under all their shopping bags. A couple of well-placed mental nudges had made them eager to carry the Xavier sisters' things. It was not like THEY'D be carrying them themselves. That would, like, TOTALLY
ruin their bitchin' manicure.
Charlize and Emma pouted as their minds scanned people there. For some reason, no one knew who the two girls were, despite them having inherited the mansion; they thought they were Charles Xavier and Emma Frost. As IF! Barf city!
The two accepted that maybe the Name-Changer did change their minds to make them think they were the children of the two mutants instead of actually being them. But if he had, Charlize and Emma were grateful. Choosing between being a pair of pampered princesses
or being Professor Blah and Emma Yawn? Ha! No choice at all!
They saw Scott and Storm come up to them, with Lola as always hanging on Scott's arm.
"Emma, who's this?" Scott asked.
* * *
Name-Changer chuckled to himself. He'd been having a lot of fun with the X-Men, but it was probably time to move on and toy with some other people. Just for a little variety. Besides, the X-Men had a lot of stuff to deal with now.
But before he left, there was one more change he wanted to do.
He wrote down "Renee LaBeau - Gambit Queen." Formerly a mutant thief, now the most exuberant, extravagant mutant drag queen of them all....
Or add your own
XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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