Ben’s Wonderful/Horrific Night!?

by DeMonic
Storyline Marvel Hags & Trolls
Previous Chapter Jonny wakes up on the couch, only to find his face and body mutilated by horrific burn scars...

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Ben lay in his bed stunned; he’d actually been awake and aware that something...unusual was a foot well before any of his team mates, but he’d never gotten a chance to raise any kind of alarm...


Earlier, just after midnight...


“Ben, wake up”

As his mind slowly rose to consciousness, his head still apparently stuffed with cotton wool, he was aware that whoever was speaking had been saying the exact same thing over and over for some time, seemingly stuck on a kind of mental loop. The voice itself he didn’t recognise, it had a coarse, raspy quality too it, and yet there was something...

“Ben, wake up”

“I’m up, am up...”Ben growled/slurred, prying his eyes open and swinging them over to the source of the voice. Whoever it was, was standing over on the far side of the room looking into his mirror (god how he hated that mirror...but there was no use going out with smuts all over him) but he could only make them out in silhouette, as the only light source in the room was over the mirror itself; however the sheer size and bulk of that silhouette should have been enough to set off the alarm bells in his head...and yet they were silent, some deep instinctive part of him KNOWING there was no threat here, despite the seeming stranger in his room...

Of course those self same alarms began to BLARE as he hauled himself from his bed; his weight was wrong, his height was wrong, his centre of balance was off, his BODY was wrong... the unaccountable discrepancies throwing him off and even rising nausea...

Rather than stopping, Ben locked his eyes on and stumbled towards the large shadow in front of the mirror, some strangely...protective urge driving him on, but then his eyes slid past the figure locking on his own reflection, and he suddenly became light headed...

The first thing to strike him was...he was HUMAN...Oh, God he was human...no more MONSTER seemingly made up of a pile of orange rubble...the second thing was that he wasn’t Ben Grimm...

Ben hadn’t ever exactly been an oil painting, but who ever this was staring back in the mirror was someone whose looks would cause little old ladies to cross the street and little kids to piss themselves in terror...

He was bald as an egg, with heavy looming brows, and he’d put on at least two foot in height, making him about 8ft tall, but he was also almost comically broad turning him into a huge, looming presence whether he liked it or not...his face seemed to be made up mostly of scars and pock marks, one massive one in particular bisected his head right to left, running from the back of his scalp, across his face, through his badly set nose (which had obviously been smashed so often it was now almost flat and spread across his face) across his cheek (which drew back his lip, into a kind of unpleasant, permanent half smirk) and down his jaw line...

But if possible it was his body that was worst, it was in some way almost deformed with muscle...there was no symmetry or lines too it, just muscle bulging everywhere, seemingly on the verge of bursting, different muscle group unevenly developed...thick knotted cords of sinew straining against too tight skin...it was like the ultimate advisement for the consequences of steroid abuse...and hanging between his legs almost it his knees, like the fever dream of some deranged porn director, or a hideously deformed snake was his...literally... monstrous cock; as thick around as a coke can, it’s head almost the size of a grown man’s clenched fist and backed up by balls the size of large goose eggs...it looked less like a part of his body and more like a weapon intend to inflict damage...

As he’d been taking this all in, he’d continued, dazed to move towards the mirror; having no reached it, he turned to look at who had first called him over...

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Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in

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