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The crew gets on the Normandy to leave. A sub-avatar meets Shepard in his cabin to give him his gender-switch ability...

by MrHookman
Storyline Normandy Gone Wild
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Shepard stood in his cabin having a miniature panic attack. He was sure that the arrival of the Avatar was some sort of fever dream, maybe he was lying in the ashes of Earth right now with a Reaper stood over him ready to give the death blow. He pinched the skin on his forearm, hard, to be sure.

"Its not a dream." Said a sultry voice from behind Shepard.
He tucked and rolled to the side and drew his firearm. What he saw was an absolutely stunning woman that seemed to shine from within. She raised one perfect eyebrow and looked at his pistol.
"Really? You think that could hurt me?"
Shepard put away the gun and apologized. At such close proximity it was difficult to even look at the Avatar without blushing, such was its beauty.
"Are you here to... To..."
"To give you your first ability, yes. Its best if you take off your clothes, the first transformation might be uncomfortable otherwise."

Shepard laughed nervously "I'm not gonna take off my clothes... In front of you."
"Whats wrong, Commander?" Said the Avatar with a smirk "We'll be seeing a lot more than that by the time your job is done."
Shepard knew that it was right of course, he just wasn't thinking very straight under the pressure of the current situation. He peeled the tight t-shirt from his broad torso and got to work on unbuttoning his pants. As he did so the Avatar wandered through his room, as soft and elegant as a ballerina, looking through the Commanders possessions and taking occasional glances at his body.

As Shepard's underwear hit the ground she span on one heel and took in his naked, muscular soldiers body.
She breathed out a curious breath and said "Interesting..." 


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extreme1 - 1/23/2017 6:33 AM
And the first chapter of the story has been brought over. Now we see where it goes on here.
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:57 AM
Helen-Troy, I understand how you feel. RL politics always brings out the most polarizing elements. Most of the writers I've had contact with here would take it as intended, but there are FAR more readers and where They might take it is where the s--- s
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:50 AM
Extreme1, people put stories from here on other sites a lot. If it's your story, there's no question you can put it where you want. If it's someone else's, I'd ask first and add a line at the top stating who wrote it & where it was from, but it's up to
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 5:06 AM
Question: would it be ok to bring a story (well the first chapter) from another site? I've got a long dead story from BE's Addventures that I'd like to see this place's take on.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:31 AM
site, the bad guys don't lose often lol. Not sure if I'll add anything, but, if it keeps going, I'll keep checking it out.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:28 AM
Helen-Troy Understandable, it read to me as satire. But, I also think this particular election hit on some really deep schisms so people are understandably raw right now (As a Mexican-American, it's been a fucking nightmare). Also, LBR, on this sit
colleem - 1/23/2017 4:17 AM
Aye. But somehow he is the Luck one who gets what he wants so he is the Hero. I see him only as possible funny side Char
Helen-Troy - 1/23/2017 4:05 AM
Guys I'm a little surprised by reaction to this. It's satire, with the possibility to go two ways (let's face it, I hardly made him a "hero") and as for politics, this place is hardly PC at all!
colleem - 1/23/2017 1:58 AM
Aye. Besides the fact that it was trump it was a very good chapter.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 12:04 AM
ESchorcho, agreed.



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