The crew gets on the Normandy to leave. A sub-avatar meets Shepard in his cabin to give him his gender-switch ability...

by MrHookman
Storyline Normandy Gone Wild
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Shepard stood in his cabin having a miniature panic attack. He was sure that the arrival of the Avatar was some sort of fever dream, maybe he was lying in the ashes of Earth right now with a Reaper stood over him ready to give the death blow. He pinched the skin on his forearm, hard, to be sure.

"Its not a dream." Said a sultry voice from behind Shepard.
He tucked and rolled to the side and drew his firearm. What he saw was an absolutely stunning woman that seemed to shine from within. She raised one perfect eyebrow and looked at his pistol.
"Really? You think that could hurt me?"
Shepard put away the gun and apologized. At such close proximity it was difficult to even look at the Avatar without blushing, such was its beauty.
"Are you here to... To..."
"To give you your first ability, yes. Its best if you take off your clothes, the first transformation might be uncomfortable otherwise."

Shepard laughed nervously "I'm not gonna take off my clothes... In front of you."
"Whats wrong, Commander?" Said the Avatar with a smirk "We'll be seeing a lot more than that by the time your job is done."
Shepard knew that it was right of course, he just wasn't thinking very straight under the pressure of the current situation. He peeled the tight t-shirt from his broad torso and got to work on unbuttoning his pants. As he did so the Avatar wandered through his room, as soft and elegant as a ballerina, looking through the Commanders possessions and taking occasional glances at his body.

As Shepard's underwear hit the ground she span on one heel and took in his naked, muscular soldiers body.
She breathed out a curious breath and said "Interesting..." 

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Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in

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