Title

Ms. Menace offers the Invisible Whore to Peter Parker as a reward for his cooperation

by aspiringactor
Storyline Good Girls Gone Bad (Marvel)
Characters Invisible Woman Mary Marvel Spider-Man
Category
Previous Chapter Maria Hill watches as Moonstone flies away. She orders Black Widow to do what ever is necessary to get a collar to be copied

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"Knock Knock," the husky voice of Ms Menace said as she entered the room. He snapped around to face her, abandoning his workstation as she approached. behind her, Peter could recognize Susan Storm. Or, rather, what was left of her. Because of the collar, she was literally a walking husk of a woman. One who could only talk if Carol allowed it. 

"You won," Peter said in a matter-of-fact tone.

"Surprised?" Ms Menace smirked as she yanked on a chain in her hands, which was attached to Susan's neck. 

"Not really," he said, hoping to appease her, and avoid having one of the collars placed around his neck. After all, it was only a matter of time before she ran out of uses for him. "It was only a matter of time before you overpowered her. She underestimated you again."

"Me and my army," Ms Menace corrected with a smile. "Which is why I'm here," she cooed as she dragged Susan along on the chain. "I reward the people who make me happy," she said as she trailed a powerful finger along his chest. 

"Serving you is reward enough," he replied with a slight gulp. Her idea of a 'reward' might involve grinding him into dust. 

"Peter peter peter," Ms Menace cooed as she wrapped her powerful arms around him. "I can read you like a book. You're no different from any other man. You have certain....needs."

"I don't-" He began to say, only to be silenced by a finger overtop of his lips. 

"Don't lie to me. You've always lusted after other heroines," she smiled, "which is why I'm giving you your own personal fucktoy while I'm gone," she said as she gave the chain a final tug, pulling Susan down onto the ground in front of him. With a simple motion, Ms Menace tossed him the chain's free end. "Use her as you wish. Build yourself a collar to control her. Have her build more collars, or give you a blow-job, or help you gather the ingredients for the formula you've been concocting that you think I don't know about," she finished as her hands teased around his cock. 

"Thank you mistress...." he said in a submissive tone, as he bowed his head, only for her to lift him into the air.

"But understand this," Ms Menace growled threateningly, "If you fail me, or disappoint me, I will tear your oh-so-dear Aunt limb from limb while you watch. Understood?" she finished as she set him down, and left the room without pause, and leaving him alone with his personal slave. And so, he returned to his workstation, where he had been working on a......


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ESchorcho - 10/1/2014 7:55 PM
Drake, it was Tamara. http://www.mcstories.com/BimboTechHelpWanted/BimboTechHelpWanted.html
Drake G. Reaper - 10/1/2014 5:19 PM
Hey EScorcho did you ever have a name in mind for the person Tittiefuck used to be before she became a bimbo?
ESchorcho - 10/1/2014 6:32 AM
MacroLass, Master_Kind - check out the message board.
colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing



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