Ms. Menace offers the Invisible Whore to Peter Parker as a reward for his cooperation

by aspiringactor
Storyline Good Girls Gone Bad (Marvel)
Characters Invisible Woman Mary Marvel Spider-Man
Previous Chapter Maria Hill watches as Moonstone flies away. She orders Black Widow to do what ever is necessary to get a collar to be copied

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"Knock Knock," the husky voice of Ms Menace said as she entered the room. He snapped around to face her, abandoning his workstation as she approached. behind her, Peter could recognize Susan Storm. Or, rather, what was left of her. Because of the collar, she was literally a walking husk of a woman. One who could only talk if Carol allowed it. 

"You won," Peter said in a matter-of-fact tone.

"Surprised?" Ms Menace smirked as she yanked on a chain in her hands, which was attached to Susan's neck. 

"Not really," he said, hoping to appease her, and avoid having one of the collars placed around his neck. After all, it was only a matter of time before she ran out of uses for him. "It was only a matter of time before you overpowered her. She underestimated you again."

"Me and my army," Ms Menace corrected with a smile. "Which is why I'm here," she cooed as she dragged Susan along on the chain. "I reward the people who make me happy," she said as she trailed a powerful finger along his chest. 

"Serving you is reward enough," he replied with a slight gulp. Her idea of a 'reward' might involve grinding him into dust. 

"Peter peter peter," Ms Menace cooed as she wrapped her powerful arms around him. "I can read you like a book. You're no different from any other man. You have certain....needs."

"I don't-" He began to say, only to be silenced by a finger overtop of his lips. 

"Don't lie to me. You've always lusted after other heroines," she smiled, "which is why I'm giving you your own personal fucktoy while I'm gone," she said as she gave the chain a final tug, pulling Susan down onto the ground in front of him. With a simple motion, Ms Menace tossed him the chain's free end. "Use her as you wish. Build yourself a collar to control her. Have her build more collars, or give you a blow-job, or help you gather the ingredients for the formula you've been concocting that you think I don't know about," she finished as her hands teased around his cock. 

"Thank you mistress...." he said in a submissive tone, as he bowed his head, only for her to lift him into the air.

"But understand this," Ms Menace growled threateningly, "If you fail me, or disappoint me, I will tear your oh-so-dear Aunt limb from limb while you watch. Understood?" she finished as she set him down, and left the room without pause, and leaving him alone with his personal slave. And so, he returned to his workstation, where he had been working on a......

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gothamalleyviper - 11/30/2015 10:25 AM
CC, the fix I found was to go back in Internet Explorer and re-do the breaks.
CorruptionCentral - 11/30/2015 8:57 AM
Had the same issue GAV noted posting in Chrome. Tried MS Edge too with same result. Finally copied text into Work and changed font to Times New Roman. That worked, kinda
gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.

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