Title

Ms. Menace offers the Invisible Whore to Peter Parker as a reward for his cooperation

by aspiringactor
Storyline Good Girls Gone Bad (Marvel)
Characters Invisible Woman Mary Marvel Spider-Man
Category
Previous Chapter Maria Hill watches as Moonstone flies away. She orders Black Widow to do what ever is necessary to get a collar to be copied

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"Knock Knock," the husky voice of Ms Menace said as she entered the room. He snapped around to face her, abandoning his workstation as she approached. behind her, Peter could recognize Susan Storm. Or, rather, what was left of her. Because of the collar, she was literally a walking husk of a woman. One who could only talk if Carol allowed it. 

"You won," Peter said in a matter-of-fact tone.

"Surprised?" Ms Menace smirked as she yanked on a chain in her hands, which was attached to Susan's neck. 

"Not really," he said, hoping to appease her, and avoid having one of the collars placed around his neck. After all, it was only a matter of time before she ran out of uses for him. "It was only a matter of time before you overpowered her. She underestimated you again."

"Me and my army," Ms Menace corrected with a smile. "Which is why I'm here," she cooed as she dragged Susan along on the chain. "I reward the people who make me happy," she said as she trailed a powerful finger along his chest. 

"Serving you is reward enough," he replied with a slight gulp. Her idea of a 'reward' might involve grinding him into dust. 

"Peter peter peter," Ms Menace cooed as she wrapped her powerful arms around him. "I can read you like a book. You're no different from any other man. You have certain....needs."

"I don't-" He began to say, only to be silenced by a finger overtop of his lips. 

"Don't lie to me. You've always lusted after other heroines," she smiled, "which is why I'm giving you your own personal fucktoy while I'm gone," she said as she gave the chain a final tug, pulling Susan down onto the ground in front of him. With a simple motion, Ms Menace tossed him the chain's free end. "Use her as you wish. Build yourself a collar to control her. Have her build more collars, or give you a blow-job, or help you gather the ingredients for the formula you've been concocting that you think I don't know about," she finished as her hands teased around his cock. 

"Thank you mistress...." he said in a submissive tone, as he bowed his head, only for her to lift him into the air.

"But understand this," Ms Menace growled threateningly, "If you fail me, or disappoint me, I will tear your oh-so-dear Aunt limb from limb while you watch. Understood?" she finished as she set him down, and left the room without pause, and leaving him alone with his personal slave. And so, he returned to his workstation, where he had been working on a......


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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