Title

After Carl finishes with her, Sue is trying to regain some control

by exidor455
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Fantastic Four Invisible Woman
Category Corruption
Previous Chapter Sue tries to turn Carl down, but the curse won't have it

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After she climbed off a panting Carl, Susan pulled her latex mini-dress down over her luscious ass and went to fix herself up in the mirror in his office. She was about to fix her newly black hair and suddenly felt herself reeling. My God, what was she doing? She had just sucked and fucked a vile thug, and loved every second of it! Some part of her mind realized that she must be under some kind of outside influence, and she had to fight it! She had to get out of here and back to the Baxter Building and try to work out what was wrong.

Mephisto was still observing all this from his infernal realm. He now had the succubus down on all fours and was sliding his massive cock in and out of her clutching asshole as she mewled with dark delight. Seeing that the pure, good part of Susan's soul was struggling to reassert herself, he spoke some more incantations and pointed his hand towards the portal between realms.

In the mirror, Susan saw herself change. Her skin turned to scarlet and two small horns sprouted from her forehead. Her beautiful blue eyes shrank into slits. Her demonic reflection smiled a smile of pure sensual wickedness,then opened her mouth and slid out a tongue that was unnaturally long, and forked! Susan gasped at seeing this, and as she did, the wicked temptress in the mirror suddenly spat. The glob of liquid flew out from the mirror and landed squarely in Susan's own mouth. In her shock she swallowed without thinking, and moaned as she felt hot, burning liquid slide down her throat. It seemed to ignite a flame within her. Her whole body thrilled with a sensation of dark, carnal lust. The demonic temptress in the mirror faded away, revealing her own reflection, smiling at her wickedly.

The good and pure part of Susan's soul shrieked as it was banished and buried deep within her psyche. For now, her dark side had won.

Carl was tucking his cock back in his jeans, and eyeing the gorgeous latex-clad slut as she re-applied her glossy red lipstick at the mirror. "That was fucking awesome, you hot bitch. You know, you could make a shitload more money around here if you'd give the customers some"extra" service. You fuck like a pro, so why not be one?"

Sue turned to him, smiling, and said:


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Dendro - 11/22/2014 9:05 PM
Hey sorry ESchorcho, busy couple of weeks. Could you send it to thisisizzy@gmail.com? Thanks again.
gethewil - 11/20/2014 1:56 PM
Looking for " Golden Maiden" by Caliban
Drake G. Reaper - 11/18/2014 8:00 PM
I've just posted a Destiny crossover story I hope you guys have fun with it.
Sailor Mercury - 11/18/2014 3:50 PM
Marvel's current events are real good ideas for stories!
venkman - 11/18/2014 2:35 AM
Coming out of lurking / semi retirement to join the chorus of approval for Ghosthands latest update. Inspired stuff. Hoping I'll be contributing again before year is out :)
ESchorcho - 11/17/2014 11:19 AM
I'm going to echo secondchance's compliments, Ghosthand. Excellent Wonder Woman's Hooker Adventure chapter. Keep up the great work!
secondchance - 11/16/2014 3:34 PM
Well Done Ghosthand on the Wonder Woman's Hooker adventure. I have ideas for Sammie at her new digs at the Candy Goose. I will take a shot at that soon and we can see what happens next for Dee :-)
ESchorcho - 11/12/2014 3:41 PM
What's your email, Dendro? That storyline is one of the only ones from the old Addventure that I have.
Dendro - 11/11/2014 1:11 AM
Hey ESchorcho, I was a fan of some of your work that was on the old Superstories. Do you have any copies of Buffy In Hell?
colleem - 11/10/2014 3:39 PM
Elschoro. I won´t write anything new for a long time i think :) Feel free to add something new to the Dracula Story :)



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