Title

After Carl finishes with her, Sue is trying to regain some control

by exidor455
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Fantastic Four Invisible Woman
Category Corruption
Previous Chapter Sue tries to turn Carl down, but the curse won't have it

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After she climbed off a panting Carl, Susan pulled her latex mini-dress down over her luscious ass and went to fix herself up in the mirror in his office. She was about to fix her newly black hair and suddenly felt herself reeling. My God, what was she doing? She had just sucked and fucked a vile thug, and loved every second of it! Some part of her mind realized that she must be under some kind of outside influence, and she had to fight it! She had to get out of here and back to the Baxter Building and try to work out what was wrong.

Mephisto was still observing all this from his infernal realm. He now had the succubus down on all fours and was sliding his massive cock in and out of her clutching asshole as she mewled with dark delight. Seeing that the pure, good part of Susan's soul was struggling to reassert herself, he spoke some more incantations and pointed his hand towards the portal between realms.

In the mirror, Susan saw herself change. Her skin turned to scarlet and two small horns sprouted from her forehead. Her beautiful blue eyes shrank into slits. Her demonic reflection smiled a smile of pure sensual wickedness,then opened her mouth and slid out a tongue that was unnaturally long, and forked! Susan gasped at seeing this, and as she did, the wicked temptress in the mirror suddenly spat. The glob of liquid flew out from the mirror and landed squarely in Susan's own mouth. In her shock she swallowed without thinking, and moaned as she felt hot, burning liquid slide down her throat. It seemed to ignite a flame within her. Her whole body thrilled with a sensation of dark, carnal lust. The demonic temptress in the mirror faded away, revealing her own reflection, smiling at her wickedly.

The good and pure part of Susan's soul shrieked as it was banished and buried deep within her psyche. For now, her dark side had won.

Carl was tucking his cock back in his jeans, and eyeing the gorgeous latex-clad slut as she re-applied her glossy red lipstick at the mirror. "That was fucking awesome, you hot bitch. You know, you could make a shitload more money around here if you'd give the customers some"extra" service. You fuck like a pro, so why not be one?"

Sue turned to him, smiling, and said:


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ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)
colleem - 8/13/2017 1:36 AM
@King :) Everything works here (execpt the Homepage itself^^) The only wish i had would be a writer that puts some effort into the Story. Background length character depth and so on :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:07 PM
Sorry Ruleradvent, I was a bit shitty there. But I hate non-chapters. If you're going to write something, write something. :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:00 PM
Ruleradvent - figure out how this works. It's not rocket science.
kingofthefarmyard1 - 8/12/2017 11:08 AM
I might try my hand at a new story. Any suggestions?



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