Title

After Carl finishes with her, Sue is trying to regain some control

by exidor455
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Fantastic Four Invisible Woman
Category Corruption
Previous Chapter Sue tries to turn Carl down, but the curse won't have it

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After she climbed off a panting Carl, Susan pulled her latex mini-dress down over her luscious ass and went to fix herself up in the mirror in his office. She was about to fix her newly black hair and suddenly felt herself reeling. My God, what was she doing? She had just sucked and fucked a vile thug, and loved every second of it! Some part of her mind realized that she must be under some kind of outside influence, and she had to fight it! She had to get out of here and back to the Baxter Building and try to work out what was wrong.

Mephisto was still observing all this from his infernal realm. He now had the succubus down on all fours and was sliding his massive cock in and out of her clutching asshole as she mewled with dark delight. Seeing that the pure, good part of Susan's soul was struggling to reassert herself, he spoke some more incantations and pointed his hand towards the portal between realms.

In the mirror, Susan saw herself change. Her skin turned to scarlet and two small horns sprouted from her forehead. Her beautiful blue eyes shrank into slits. Her demonic reflection smiled a smile of pure sensual wickedness,then opened her mouth and slid out a tongue that was unnaturally long, and forked! Susan gasped at seeing this, and as she did, the wicked temptress in the mirror suddenly spat. The glob of liquid flew out from the mirror and landed squarely in Susan's own mouth. In her shock she swallowed without thinking, and moaned as she felt hot, burning liquid slide down her throat. It seemed to ignite a flame within her. Her whole body thrilled with a sensation of dark, carnal lust. The demonic temptress in the mirror faded away, revealing her own reflection, smiling at her wickedly.

The good and pure part of Susan's soul shrieked as it was banished and buried deep within her psyche. For now, her dark side had won.

Carl was tucking his cock back in his jeans, and eyeing the gorgeous latex-clad slut as she re-applied her glossy red lipstick at the mirror. "That was fucking awesome, you hot bitch. You know, you could make a shitload more money around here if you'd give the customers some"extra" service. You fuck like a pro, so why not be one?"

Sue turned to him, smiling, and said:


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January - 12/20/2014 2:59 AM
I love this Medieval Madness line. Might think of trying to add on to it, but I've never posted an episode on this site...
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 10:05 PM
ES, look for a doctor in the fish
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 10:00 PM
GAV, I loved the chapter. I did like the Diana/Lois interaction. Still can't believe I did that. What is going to happen in the ceremony? Want to continue this in the message board?
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:34 PM
I am wondering if the same people are posting twisted Disney Princess stories here http://www.pinterest.com/pin/552746554236351206/
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:31 PM
@ ES, I did incorporate it, I hope you like where I took the rest of the cast throw the morning.
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 9:16 PM
gothamalleyviper, I messed up on my Lois Human Sacrifice chapter in Rubber Queen. It should have come after your Human Sacrifice chapter. Can't believe I did that.
colleem - 12/18/2014 11:25 AM
Susan´s dream is online. I will try to write Tony´s dream until Saturday. If someone want to write with CC and me in this Story just tell it :) We are talking about Email for better planing
gothamalleyviper - 12/17/2014 8:42 PM
I am about half way throw the chapter for Rubberqueen, and plotted out the "Wedding Chapter", but I keep getting interupted by my life AFK. I kind of want the Warhamer can from 63 Joker and go play "Whack-a-Joe"
colleem - 12/17/2014 2:14 PM
Oprimus... dont you think that it is a bit... unfair to post empty chapters?
ESchorcho - 12/17/2014 7:34 AM
gothamalleyviper, do you need any help with Rubber Queen? Let me know. If you want to start a discussion in the Message Board I would be willing to talk.



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