Title

How is the Hellfire Club doing?

by aspiringactor
Storyline Good Girls Gone Bad (Marvel)
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Previous Chapter Peter succumbs

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The Hellfire club soldiers who had been assigned to the Baxter building where bored. Ever since their white queen had been toppled, they had been simply waiting for new orders from their new commander, Ms Menace. All she had told them was that no one was to enter the building, save for Moonstone and the Fantastic Four, all of whom she had placed under a form of mind control. 


A large explosion caught their attention, and all four guards aimed their weapons in one general direction. 

"We've got move-" one of them began, only to be cut off by the brown-haired Rogue slamming his face into the ground. She quickly dispatched of two more guards, before turning to face the last. "Bring Danvers out here now," the mutant growled. 


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ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)
colleem - 8/13/2017 1:36 AM
@King :) Everything works here (execpt the Homepage itself^^) The only wish i had would be a writer that puts some effort into the Story. Background length character depth and so on :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:07 PM
Sorry Ruleradvent, I was a bit shitty there. But I hate non-chapters. If you're going to write something, write something. :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:00 PM
Ruleradvent - figure out how this works. It's not rocket science.
kingofthefarmyard1 - 8/12/2017 11:08 AM
I might try my hand at a new story. Any suggestions?



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