How is the Hellfire Club doing?

by aspiringactor
Storyline Good Girls Gone Bad (Marvel)
Previous Chapter Peter succumbs

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The Hellfire club soldiers who had been assigned to the Baxter building where bored. Ever since their white queen had been toppled, they had been simply waiting for new orders from their new commander, Ms Menace. All she had told them was that no one was to enter the building, save for Moonstone and the Fantastic Four, all of whom she had placed under a form of mind control. 

A large explosion caught their attention, and all four guards aimed their weapons in one general direction. 

"We've got move-" one of them began, only to be cut off by the brown-haired Rogue slamming his face into the ground. She quickly dispatched of two more guards, before turning to face the last. "Bring Danvers out here now," the mutant growled. 

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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