Title

She needs a Champion

by gothamalleyviper
Storyline The Return of the Black Queen
Characters X-23
Category F/F
Previous Chapter Another woman is turned into Jean's submissive slave

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All those girls, but she also needed a man at some point.  Cyclops just seemed so Blaww as she laid there fingering her snatch.  An idea struck her mind.  Logan, Logan was short, but he was built like a god and hung like a horse.  He was perfect once she had control of him. 


Down the Girls Hall

Laura was picking her teeth with her claw.  Her room mate constantly complained about it, said it was a childish habit.  Right now she was visiting her parents, so Laura sat on her bed picking her teeth. 

[Laura please come, I need a hand with something] Jean's voice called inside Laura's head.

Laura got up and walked out her room.  Jean had been nice to her since she had came back.  Once she got to Jean's door she stopped, she smelled... sex.  What the?

"Jean?" Laura turned the door knob and poked her head in.

She saw Jean Grey, the naive young girl sitting on her bed in her pressed flanel pajamas.

"Laura," Jean smiled, "I'm sorry I violated your privacy, but I needed someone to talk to."

"Yeah, well I guess it cuts out dailing the cellphone.  But hey..."

"I tried your phone," Jean smiled, "It said the voice mail box was not set up."

"Uhm, oh yeah," Laura looked back, "I may not have charged it in a few days."

Laura heard a moan coming from next room over.  She didn't see Jean smile nor her rub her hand inside the black thong.  Jean knew that Laura was only seeing and hearing what she made her.

"They have been making that noise for over an hour," Jean pointed at her wall.

"Uhm, Jean" Laura stammered, "They are... You know... A boy and a girl..."

"There are only two girls in there," Jean said.

Jean could see the confusion in Laura's head, and she was having fun manipulating her.  Once she had X-23 she would collect her Weapon-X.


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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