The bait is laid

by Regigigas Rules
Storyline Hive of the Wasp
Characters Amora the Enchantress Wasp
Category Corruption Mind Control
Previous Chapter Hornet Queen kidnaps Jane Foster, to use as a trap for Thor, but does not convert Jane..............yet.

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Thor was flying through the sky. He did not believe the Wasp had turned evil. He had fought by her side more times than he could count. She was one of the least evil people he had ever met, and knew if it was true she had to be under mind control or something.

As he flew some green smoke appeared and formed the shape of a circle and he stopped. An image appeared, in the middle. It was of Janet van Dyne, the Wasp. "Hello Thor." She said in a bit of a sadistic tone, she was wearing a green dress similar to someone Thor knew.

"Friend Wasp! Thy know thou have not truly turned evil. Who is the foul fiend who has corrupted yon mind."

"That would be me." said the Enchantress as she appeared.

"AMORA! What hath thou done to thy friend, Wasp!"

"When I first fought thou all I took a bit of a liking to Janet here, she's spunky. I decided to make her thy apprentice. I had to put quite a few brain washing spells on her but after about 5 she was soon BEGGING me to make her evil. And I have plans for a second apprentice as well." She then shows him the tied up Jane Foster.


"Just come to thy secret dimension, I know you've been there before. Also come alone." The image and green smoke dissapeared.

Thor furiously, spun his hamer Mjolnir and opened a portal to her dimension.

(In the Hornet Queen's nest)

"Excellent work Enchantress, my slave. Thor will soon be here, and it will be time for the plan to finish."

"My queen!" said Maria with a salute. "Iron Maiden has spotted Thor. He will be here within the next 3 minuites."

"Excellent Maria. See arn't you much happier as my slave and being on the side of evil.?"

Maria blushed a bit, "Yes my queen. I truly feel more like I can be myself. I really am happier being on the side of evil working for....you." Maria tried not to look at her queen but couldn't help it.

Thor came crashing in through the roof.

"Release Jane Foster and thy friend Wasp from your evil control and I will spare thee." Said the thunder god consumed by anger.

Amora cast a spell, strapping him to a all and made him drop Mjolnir.

"Just as I planned." Janet said. Then laughed evily.

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gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496

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