Title

The bait is laid

by Regigigas Rules
Storyline Hive of the Wasp
Characters Amora the Enchantress Wasp
Category Corruption Mind Control
Previous Chapter Hornet Queen kidnaps Jane Foster, to use as a trap for Thor, but does not convert Jane..............yet.

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Thor was flying through the sky. He did not believe the Wasp had turned evil. He had fought by her side more times than he could count. She was one of the least evil people he had ever met, and knew if it was true she had to be under mind control or something.

As he flew some green smoke appeared and formed the shape of a circle and he stopped. An image appeared, in the middle. It was of Janet van Dyne, the Wasp. "Hello Thor." She said in a bit of a sadistic tone, she was wearing a green dress similar to someone Thor knew.

"Friend Wasp! Thy know thou have not truly turned evil. Who is the foul fiend who has corrupted yon mind."

"That would be me." said the Enchantress as she appeared.

"AMORA! What hath thou done to thy friend, Wasp!"

"When I first fought thou all I took a bit of a liking to Janet here, she's spunky. I decided to make her thy apprentice. I had to put quite a few brain washing spells on her but after about 5 she was soon BEGGING me to make her evil. And I have plans for a second apprentice as well." She then shows him the tied up Jane Foster.

"THOU MAKE IT TRULY DIFFICULT TO NOT SMITE THEE WITCH!"

"Just come to thy secret dimension, I know you've been there before. Also come alone." The image and green smoke dissapeared.

Thor furiously, spun his hamer Mjolnir and opened a portal to her dimension.

(In the Hornet Queen's nest)

"Excellent work Enchantress, my slave. Thor will soon be here, and it will be time for the plan to finish."

"My queen!" said Maria with a salute. "Iron Maiden has spotted Thor. He will be here within the next 3 minuites."

"Excellent Maria. See arn't you much happier as my slave and being on the side of evil.?"

Maria blushed a bit, "Yes my queen. I truly feel more like I can be myself. I really am happier being on the side of evil working for....you." Maria tried not to look at her queen but couldn't help it.

Thor came crashing in through the roof.

"Release Jane Foster and thy friend Wasp from your evil control and I will spare thee." Said the thunder god consumed by anger.

Amora cast a spell, strapping him to a all and made him drop Mjolnir.

"Just as I planned." Janet said. Then laughed evily.


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colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.
gothamalleyviper - 9/14/2014 9:09 PM
Anyone want to toss me some help with a book length project over on message board?



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