Title

The bait is laid

by Regigigas Rules
Storyline Hive of the Wasp
Characters Amora the Enchantress Wasp
Category Corruption Mind Control
Previous Chapter Hornet Queen kidnaps Jane Foster, to use as a trap for Thor, but does not convert Jane..............yet.

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Thor was flying through the sky. He did not believe the Wasp had turned evil. He had fought by her side more times than he could count. She was one of the least evil people he had ever met, and knew if it was true she had to be under mind control or something.

As he flew some green smoke appeared and formed the shape of a circle and he stopped. An image appeared, in the middle. It was of Janet van Dyne, the Wasp. "Hello Thor." She said in a bit of a sadistic tone, she was wearing a green dress similar to someone Thor knew.

"Friend Wasp! Thy know thou have not truly turned evil. Who is the foul fiend who has corrupted yon mind."

"That would be me." said the Enchantress as she appeared.

"AMORA! What hath thou done to thy friend, Wasp!"

"When I first fought thou all I took a bit of a liking to Janet here, she's spunky. I decided to make her thy apprentice. I had to put quite a few brain washing spells on her but after about 5 she was soon BEGGING me to make her evil. And I have plans for a second apprentice as well." She then shows him the tied up Jane Foster.

"THOU MAKE IT TRULY DIFFICULT TO NOT SMITE THEE WITCH!"

"Just come to thy secret dimension, I know you've been there before. Also come alone." The image and green smoke dissapeared.

Thor furiously, spun his hamer Mjolnir and opened a portal to her dimension.

(In the Hornet Queen's nest)

"Excellent work Enchantress, my slave. Thor will soon be here, and it will be time for the plan to finish."

"My queen!" said Maria with a salute. "Iron Maiden has spotted Thor. He will be here within the next 3 minuites."

"Excellent Maria. See arn't you much happier as my slave and being on the side of evil.?"

Maria blushed a bit, "Yes my queen. I truly feel more like I can be myself. I really am happier being on the side of evil working for....you." Maria tried not to look at her queen but couldn't help it.

Thor came crashing in through the roof.

"Release Jane Foster and thy friend Wasp from your evil control and I will spare thee." Said the thunder god consumed by anger.

Amora cast a spell, strapping him to a all and made him drop Mjolnir.

"Just as I planned." Janet said. Then laughed evily.


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Darth Elsa - 6/23/2016 10:52 PM
If anyone wants to add a Chapter to "Wasp: Devilish Woman" go on ahead.
Darth Elsa - 6/23/2016 7:27 PM
Alright, got a new idea for a story up. Will try and do something with Meanest Bitch soon. Sorry for the rushed pace of this first chapter, really tired my best to make it as good as I could
gothamalleyviper - 6/20/2016 1:27 PM
Posted, feed back welcomed
ESchorcho - 6/19/2016 11:35 PM
gothamalleyviper, check the message board. Could use your thoughts on Rubber Queen. Thanks.
Darth Elsa - 6/19/2016 9:02 PM
Will try and write something tomorrow, have had some writters block
gothamalleyviper - 6/19/2016 1:08 PM
Put thoughts in message board
CorruptionCentral - 6/19/2016 12:31 PM
GAV, Interesting topic for the Riddler. I would be interested in seeing what you're thinking.
CorruptionCentral - 6/19/2016 12:30 PM
Hyperion, I love the new additions to the Hydro-Woman story. Keep up the good work.
colleem - 6/19/2016 12:03 PM
gotham :) do not know enough of the riddler and do not find him very cool :) but your always welcome in one of mine ^^
gothamalleyviper - 6/19/2016 11:10 AM
Had a thought, anyone interested in a Edward Nimga / Riddler Harem building story? Also anyone want me to work on any particular stories?



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