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Dee Dee decides Susie needs to be harder for other heroines to recognize

by burke_rakers
Storyline New U Salon
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Maria Hill watched the cute, tiny manicurist as she chatted with a client in her sing-song accent. Knowing the area rather well, it was obvious that the girl ("Jian" from her name tag) was just off the boat. Her English was appaling.

"They're ready fer y'all, darlin'..." said the receptionist, a vaguely familiar looking woman whose big, blond hair and huge boobs made her look like a professional Dolly Parton impersonator. With her bright makeup and deep-south accent, Susian Storms identity was well hidden. "...jus' take a seat an' we'll have yuh all fixed-up in a jiffy."

Maria glanced aside again, looking at the girl. She was filing her long red nails, humming "9 to 5" and smoking a cigarette. She...she couldn't be who she thought she was. The resemblence must be a coincidence...

As Maria walked through to the back room, one of the girls whispered "The accent and new look's good, but we better do something to her face...just in case. I'd swear that the Hill woman recognised her. Also, her name needs to change."

Susie was summoned to the back as well, and 15 minutes later, she returned...her crimson lips a thick, pouty pillow and her heavily made-up, half-lidded eyes looking sultry and indolant. Her bottom was padded and very plump, and her body language was all sways and jiggles. Looking, acting and thinking nothing like the old Susan Storm, the new "Dolly Dixie" sat down and started working on her nails again. She loved working at "New U", but it was holding up her career as a country music singer. In a vague way, she thought about...her husband? Her kids? Dolly could remember little of the man she was married too, but her kids - little Frankie and Val - were very clear. She wanted to get them back with their momma real quick. Nobody noticed as the girl shouldered her purse, and walked out the door...in search of her children.

Meanwhile, Maria Hill...


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ESchorcho - 4/26/2016 8:17 AM
mcont44, any update on Cutter Creek?
Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2016 10:12 PM
Will try and get 2 new stories up son. Plans for a Marvel one and a Sailor Moon one.
gothamalleyviper - 4/25/2016 7:54 PM
Sorry if this last one isn't up to snuff, voice on phone upload.
extreme1 - 4/25/2016 7:25 PM
C. King Corruption is by far my favorite type of erotica, but non-erotic...I prefer corruption, but I got no problem with redemption (My favorite superhero is Gambit and redemption is pretty much the thing that motivates him).
Yang Xiao Long - 4/25/2016 6:47 PM
In erotica: Corruptio In regular things: Redmption
Meddler - 4/25/2016 6:14 PM
C.King, actually I take it back. If it's executed properly, I think a redemption story would be pretty great.
Meddler - 4/25/2016 6:07 PM
C.King, I don't feel strongly either way, partly because I think the execution can be far more important than the subject matter, but Redemption might be nice since there's not very much of that.
Darth Elsa - 4/25/2016 4:59 PM
Got it up much earlier than expected. SHould have a meanest bitch one today or wednesday at the latest
Darth Elsa - 4/25/2016 2:43 PM
Will have a chapter for Rise of the Shameless around 10pm
C.King - 4/25/2016 12:54 PM
Informal Survey: Which do you love more Redemption, Corruption or love both equal amounts?



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