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Dee Dee decides Susie needs to be harder for other heroines to recognize

by burke_rakers
Storyline New U Salon
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Maria Hill watched the cute, tiny manicurist as she chatted with a client in her sing-song accent. Knowing the area rather well, it was obvious that the girl ("Jian" from her name tag) was just off the boat. Her English was appaling.

"They're ready fer y'all, darlin'..." said the receptionist, a vaguely familiar looking woman whose big, blond hair and huge boobs made her look like a professional Dolly Parton impersonator. With her bright makeup and deep-south accent, Susian Storms identity was well hidden. "...jus' take a seat an' we'll have yuh all fixed-up in a jiffy."

Maria glanced aside again, looking at the girl. She was filing her long red nails, humming "9 to 5" and smoking a cigarette. She...she couldn't be who she thought she was. The resemblence must be a coincidence...

As Maria walked through to the back room, one of the girls whispered "The accent and new look's good, but we better do something to her face...just in case. I'd swear that the Hill woman recognised her. Also, her name needs to change."

Susie was summoned to the back as well, and 15 minutes later, she returned...her crimson lips a thick, pouty pillow and her heavily made-up, half-lidded eyes looking sultry and indolant. Her bottom was padded and very plump, and her body language was all sways and jiggles. Looking, acting and thinking nothing like the old Susan Storm, the new "Dolly Dixie" sat down and started working on her nails again. She loved working at "New U", but it was holding up her career as a country music singer. In a vague way, she thought about...her husband? Her kids? Dolly could remember little of the man she was married too, but her kids - little Frankie and Val - were very clear. She wanted to get them back with their momma real quick. Nobody noticed as the girl shouldered her purse, and walked out the door...in search of her children.

Meanwhile, Maria Hill...


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Shendude - 5/21/2013 1:18 PM
That was short but, I hope, sweet.
C.King - 5/21/2013 11:22 AM
After I typed to you, I realize with this addventure is we can do both at once.
Shendude - 5/21/2013 11:21 AM

Shendude - 5/21/2013 11:21 AM
Go ahead. I have a soft-spot for her, but if you want to use someone else be my guest; 's why I offered the option.
C.King - 5/21/2013 9:12 AM
Mind if I change Lilandra for someone else, Shendude? Or is she major to your ideas?
Shendude - 5/20/2013 3:43 PM
Concerning my newest post (Peter's Royal Harem), I'd prefer option three, but I have no objections to any of the others.
Shendude - 5/19/2013 1:01 PM
Not entirely sure what tags to use for my newest episode.
CALIBAN3K - 5/19/2013 9:42 AM
BatPimp. I will post something more next weekend. Hope you could add something during the week...
CALIBAN3K - 5/18/2013 2:16 PM
Thanks BatPimp. If I don“t post anything more this weekend, be sure that I will do the next one.
BatPimp - 5/18/2013 11:29 AM
Hi, CALIBAN3K. I'll try to add something to Pandora this weekend. Thanks for posting your contribution to "Trouble in Paradise" and "Changing the scene".



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