by Megumi
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Wasp Invisible Woman
Category Marvel
Previous Chapter The giggly receptionist for the salon.

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If Dee Dee’s goal is to turn woman into bimbos then Janet Van Dyne will be far less work then Sue Storm was.  The uptown fashionista came into the salon whining about a broken nail like it was the worst thing that ever happened to her.  Of course Janet was too modest to tell how she broke the nail saving a child from a burning building, or that she wouldn’t hesitate to do so again.

Susie treated the spoiled manicure as an emergency, and rushed Janet to a chair for immediate treatment.

Soon her nails were soaking in a warm jasmine scented finger bathe.

While working on her nails, Dee Dee asked Janet why she calls herself the wasp.  

Janet thought it was obvious.  It was because she gets small and grows insect wings.

“Oh but wasp also means white anglo saxon person.”

“Well yeah.”

“Is that how you want people to think of you?”

“Uh... I dunno.  I’m white. It’s not really an insult or anything.”

Janet asked why the finger bath was so fragrant.  Dee Dee told her that it was just tea, and the topical treatment helps clean out the skin.  Susie gave Janet a sniff of the tea leaves they use.  The concentrated scent was far more pungent.  It overwhellmed her senses and made her feel dizzy.

“So nails are important to you?”

“Nails are important to me.”  Janet repeated this as though it was not a question.

“You take pride in your manicures.”

“Pride in my manicures.”

“And Pedicures.”

“And Pedicures.”

“You want to take good care of your nails.”

“Good care of my nails.”

Janet kept thinking about nails, while Dee Dee worked on changing skin color darkening her hair and remolding her facial features.  She remembered growing up in an impoverished Vietnamese village.  Since she was small they made her work the fields all day with no concern for what it did to her fingernails.  Now, in Amerika, woman’s pay Jian many dollar to make nails beautiful.  Jian must have pretty nail so woman’s know Jian is good Manicurist.  Jian make nails pretty and Ms. Dee Dee no call immigration.

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Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in

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