Title

Its a trap and Invisible Fiend is captured by Doctor Doom

by Gorel
Storyline Abominable Avengers
Characters Avengers Doctor Doom Iron Man
Category Marvel Transformation Corruption Growth
Previous Chapter Wasp continues to seduce her enemy

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Invisible Fiend lept from her hiding spot to pounce on the unsuspecting heroes, but she was surprised when her claws passed right through Iron Fist and she collapsed on the ground. Looking up she was surrounded by the false images of her prey as their holograms flickered and shimmered. The holograms of the Heroes for Hire disappeared and an energy field wrapped itself around her, lifting her up as a small Doom probe came into view.

~I have finally caught you my dear Susan, it is time you have come to face Doom.~

"NO!" Snarled Fiend as she struggled against the energy field surrounding her, before she was lifted and carried off to the shores of Latveria.

***

The Shield Helicarrier had arrived at Doom's kingdom hours ago, and Iron Man found himself standing at the throne room of the tyrannical ruler Doom himself with Spider, Scarlet and Black Cat standing behind him as they addressed Victor.

"You have responded to my invitation Mr. Stark... Very wise of you." Scowled Victor as he sat at his throne with various screens showing him the Horde's progress. "The abominations have already taken more than half of the known world and seem poised to take my kingdom soon enough... But they will not succeed."

"What are you proposing Doom?" Asked Iron Man with his guard up, the three loyal abominations keeping an eye on the green robed ruler.

"Reed was an fool, he tried to make a cure based on science and magic but only I DOOM am master of both! I have made steps to achieve where he had failed, Thor should be here within the hour... As will another guest of my personal choice."

One of Doom's probes had arrived, floating down from the ceiling along with a very angry Susan Storm struggling against an energy bubble.

"Ah my dear Susan at last you have arrived."

"DON'T CALL ME THAT WEAKLING!" Roared Invisible Fiend, the spittle from her hiss sizzled against the energy bubble holding her. "Once I get out of this I'm going to tear your head off and eat the skin off your face!"

"Such fire, perhaps I should mean to keep that trait once you are cured."

"You think you can bring them all back?" Wondered Tony as he looked back at Spider Man and the others. "I'll only agree to help if you vow not to harm any of my friends in this."

"Agreed, my plans have nothing to do with them once this... Problem has been delt with."

***

Fem Fang foom moaned as she basked in the afterglow of her 'fight' with Wasp, waking up fully she found the Brood Mother looking down at her with Onslaught and the White Queen at her side.

"Ah your awake my sweet, my mind readers had a lovely time rewritting your mind and the minds of your little team." Giggled Wasp as Fem Fang Foom sat up crouching before her master, even so she was so large that Wasp barely came up to her knees. "I've also learned of Doom's plans from your mind, to think he wishes to turn us back into the soft skinned weaklings we once were... Absurd!" The rest of the horde grumbled in her response.

"WHAT SHALL I DO MY MISTRESS... WHAT DO YOU WISH OF ME?" Growled Fem Fang Foom, totally obedient to the Brood Mother.

"In due time my love, in due time. This world is ours now let the Horde's reign be known to the pitiful humans that still infest these lands."

With that the Horde scattered to conquer and devour leaving the Wasp to return to her Nest to rule.


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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