The cake does exactly what Merida wanted. Having a taste of power Merida decides to train and become a witch herself

by Joebob
Storyline Eviltales
Characters Merida Elinor
Category Disney
Previous Chapter Merida

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When Merida gave the cake to Elinor, her mother instantly accepted her apology and didn't even hesitate in accepting her lie. 

As soon as Elinor took a bite out of the cake, she set the plate down.

" I'm so sorry about trying to control your fate, " she said. "From now on, you may do whatever your heart desires."

"It's ok, Mom," replied Merida. " I'm glad you understand. "

"Thank you for forgiving me," said Elinor. "It's getting late. Go to bed. Tomorrow, you may do anything you please."

As Merida went to her bedroom, she reflected on what happened during her conversation with her mom. It felt good using magic to make other people do what she wanted. It felt good having that power. She needed more. As she went to bed that night, she decided to visit the witch again tomorrow. Hopefully, she could learn some spells from her. 

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gothamalleyviper - 11/30/2015 10:25 AM
CC, the fix I found was to go back in Internet Explorer and re-do the breaks.
CorruptionCentral - 11/30/2015 8:57 AM
Had the same issue GAV noted posting in Chrome. Tried MS Edge too with same result. Finally copied text into Work and changed font to Times New Roman. That worked, kinda
gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.

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