Title

The cake does exactly what Merida wanted. Having a taste of power Merida decides to train and become a witch herself

by Joebob
Storyline Eviltales
Characters Merida Elinor
Category Disney
Previous Chapter Merida

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When Merida gave the cake to Elinor, her mother instantly accepted her apology and didn't even hesitate in accepting her lie. 

As soon as Elinor took a bite out of the cake, she set the plate down.

" I'm so sorry about trying to control your fate, " she said. "From now on, you may do whatever your heart desires."

"It's ok, Mom," replied Merida. " I'm glad you understand. "

"Thank you for forgiving me," said Elinor. "It's getting late. Go to bed. Tomorrow, you may do anything you please."

As Merida went to her bedroom, she reflected on what happened during her conversation with her mom. It felt good using magic to make other people do what she wanted. It felt good having that power. She needed more. As she went to bed that night, she decided to visit the witch again tomorrow. Hopefully, she could learn some spells from her. 


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January - 12/20/2014 2:59 AM
I love this Medieval Madness line. Might think of trying to add on to it, but I've never posted an episode on this site...
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 10:05 PM
ES, look for a doctor in the fish
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 10:00 PM
GAV, I loved the chapter. I did like the Diana/Lois interaction. Still can't believe I did that. What is going to happen in the ceremony? Want to continue this in the message board?
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:34 PM
I am wondering if the same people are posting twisted Disney Princess stories here http://www.pinterest.com/pin/552746554236351206/
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:31 PM
@ ES, I did incorporate it, I hope you like where I took the rest of the cast throw the morning.
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 9:16 PM
gothamalleyviper, I messed up on my Lois Human Sacrifice chapter in Rubber Queen. It should have come after your Human Sacrifice chapter. Can't believe I did that.
colleem - 12/18/2014 11:25 AM
Susan´s dream is online. I will try to write Tony´s dream until Saturday. If someone want to write with CC and me in this Story just tell it :) We are talking about Email for better planing
gothamalleyviper - 12/17/2014 8:42 PM
I am about half way throw the chapter for Rubberqueen, and plotted out the "Wedding Chapter", but I keep getting interupted by my life AFK. I kind of want the Warhamer can from 63 Joker and go play "Whack-a-Joe"
colleem - 12/17/2014 2:14 PM
Oprimus... dont you think that it is a bit... unfair to post empty chapters?
ESchorcho - 12/17/2014 7:34 AM
gothamalleyviper, do you need any help with Rubber Queen? Let me know. If you want to start a discussion in the Message Board I would be willing to talk.



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