Title

Merida

by Megumi
Storyline Eviltales
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Previous Chapter Eviltales

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Merida presented the cake to her mother.  She awkwardly lied about it being her peace offering and her mother, Elinor, accepted it graciously.

Merida’s story may not have resided in our collective consciousness as long as others.  Hers is a legend that though very old, was uncovered only recently.  Despite how long we’ve known the tale, this moment in time should be familiar to all of us.  It is the moment when things started to go wrong.

In the world we know, the cake turned her into a bear.  This itself was a horrible fate, I admit.  Slowly Elinor would forget a Queens manners, and perhaps even a mothers love.  Her former self replaced with a bear, a vicious animal.  

Yet, Elinors beastly transformation would have prompted Merida to go on a quest to seek a cure.  The Mother and daughter would work together and the story would end with Elinor saved and the families bond made much stronger.

What if the witch who posed as a wood carver had given Merida a different cake?  What if Elinor had suffered a different fate?

What if?


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C.King - 4/24/2014 9:54 AM
Good Job, Kirayoshi. Good Job. I'll see if I have a story to continue it.
gothamalleyviper - 4/23/2014 7:41 PM
One short, one longer, but hope people provide feed back
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.
Fanfic Fetishist - 4/18/2014 10:06 PM
I hope everyone's been enjoying my Ben 10 story so far.



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