by Megumi
Storyline Eviltales
Previous Chapter Eviltales

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Merida presented the cake to her mother.  She awkwardly lied about it being her peace offering and her mother, Elinor, accepted it graciously.

Merida’s story may not have resided in our collective consciousness as long as others.  Hers is a legend that though very old, was uncovered only recently.  Despite how long we’ve known the tale, this moment in time should be familiar to all of us.  It is the moment when things started to go wrong.

In the world we know, the cake turned her into a bear.  This itself was a horrible fate, I admit.  Slowly Elinor would forget a Queens manners, and perhaps even a mothers love.  Her former self replaced with a bear, a vicious animal.  

Yet, Elinors beastly transformation would have prompted Merida to go on a quest to seek a cure.  The Mother and daughter would work together and the story would end with Elinor saved and the families bond made much stronger.

What if the witch who posed as a wood carver had given Merida a different cake?  What if Elinor had suffered a different fate?

What if?

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ESchorcho - 11/30/2015 6:57 PM
gothamalleyviper, I'm working on a new Rubber Queen chapter. Look for it in the next few days.
gothamalleyviper - 11/30/2015 10:25 AM
CC, the fix I found was to go back in Internet Explorer and re-do the breaks.
CorruptionCentral - 11/30/2015 8:57 AM
Had the same issue GAV noted posting in Chrome. Tried MS Edge too with same result. Finally copied text into Work and changed font to Times New Roman. That worked, kinda
gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.

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