Title

Merida

by Megumi
Storyline Eviltales
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Merida presented the cake to her mother.  She awkwardly lied about it being her peace offering and her mother, Elinor, accepted it graciously.

Merida’s story may not have resided in our collective consciousness as long as others.  Hers is a legend that though very old, was uncovered only recently.  Despite how long we’ve known the tale, this moment in time should be familiar to all of us.  It is the moment when things started to go wrong.

In the world we know, the cake turned her into a bear.  This itself was a horrible fate, I admit.  Slowly Elinor would forget a Queens manners, and perhaps even a mothers love.  Her former self replaced with a bear, a vicious animal.  

Yet, Elinors beastly transformation would have prompted Merida to go on a quest to seek a cure.  The Mother and daughter would work together and the story would end with Elinor saved and the families bond made much stronger.

What if the witch who posed as a wood carver had given Merida a different cake?  What if Elinor had suffered a different fate?

What if?


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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