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Warning: I'm speak french and I rarely speak english, so I'm sorry if some sentences may look hazardous. It's my first attempt to a large scale storiy. I hope that you will enjoy my work, as I will pass some time about this particuliar
character, Snow White.
Once upon a time,
In a far away kingdom,
An humble, sweet and innocent girl with a destiny bigger than herself was on the verge to live a dramatical event that will change for the better good the lives of countless beings, although she would have to withstand harsh and emotionnally painful tests.
Virtue, innocence, beauty and good will prevail against corruption, greed, fiends and evil.
Their stories will be read by their children and their grandchildren and, unknown to her, children and grandchildren of other reality.
Beautiful stories for a sweet and peaceful night full of marvelous dreams.
But then, something terrible happens. Internet. Those sweet princess-to-be are unaware of this.
And then, there is superstories.net, a place where pervert and mind-corrupting people tranforms good, pure and angelic characters into helpless, depraved, oh my god what's happening to me victims, slut or, even, their opposite, evil beings.
Fairytales will never been the same
Or add your own
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:00 AM
For general plot, I'd like to focus on Diana building her harem, with some kinky scenes, particularly one where she makes herself and her harem obese for a day.
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