Title

It's his boss. he's late for work.

by C.King
Storyline Ten Villains
Characters Spider-Man
Category Marvel and DC
Previous Chapter Peter woke up and noticed his changes....

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 Max Modell was on the phone as Peter moved and picked it up on the fourth ring, "Peter, your late. I hope you have a heck of a good reason why you're not here today."

 Peter spoke, "Sorry Max. Something's wrong with me, I was just getting ready to see a doctor. After phoning work first. I hope that's okay."

 "I think you're right Mr. Parker. You voice sounds different, a little deeper then normal. I hope you're not getting a cold or something, sir." answered Max, as Peter was surprised by two things.

 One, his voice was deeper then normal. It was still recognizable as Peter's voice, but it was deeper. Smoothier. Silkier. What he didn't know was the Alpha Male force had not stopped change Peter. It had also altered his vocal cords, so it produce an Alpha Male version of Peter's voice, which explained the deepness. It was the exact sonic tones which produced something similar to the Brown Note. The Barry White Note, which made it so women had to stop themselves from coming in their pants at just a single vibration of the cords. It also had another, non-Barry White effect, where men became intimidated. More likely to act submissive and agreeable to the speaker. Which explained point two which surprised Peter, as his boss was suddenly acting like Peter was in charge rather then Max.

 "I'll talk to you after I see someone about this... cold." asked Peter, as he tried to figure out what was happening to him.

 "Whatever you say, sir. Talk to you later, Mr. Parker." said Max as he seem wait for Peter to hang up, which the hero did. Then he tried to figure out who he could see about... this.


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colleem - 12/18/2014 11:25 AM
Susan´s dream is online. I will try to write Tony´s dream until Saturday. If someone want to write with CC and me in this Story just tell it :) We are talking about Email for better planing
gothamalleyviper - 12/17/2014 8:42 PM
I am about half way throw the chapter for Rubberqueen, and plotted out the "Wedding Chapter", but I keep getting interupted by my life AFK. I kind of want the Warhamer can from 63 Joker and go play "Whack-a-Joe"
colleem - 12/17/2014 2:14 PM
Oprimus... dont you think that it is a bit... unfair to post empty chapters?
ESchorcho - 12/17/2014 7:34 AM
gothamalleyviper, do you need any help with Rubber Queen? Let me know. If you want to start a discussion in the Message Board I would be willing to talk.
gothamalleyviper - 12/14/2014 4:39 PM
Posted 63rd Joker, working on Rubber Queen
colleem - 12/14/2014 9:26 AM
Next Chapter is online :) Have fun with it
C.King - 12/14/2014 8:52 AM
Isn't one, just a little joke from the title...
CorruptionCentral - 12/14/2014 4:39 AM
C.King: I'm not familiar with that storyline and can't find it on Google. Do you have a link?
colleem - 12/13/2014 4:40 PM
Hey Superstories :) is it possible to change the Message Board so that the newest Post is always on top? i am bored of scrolling down all the time^^
colleem - 12/13/2014 3:15 PM
thanks again :) yours are also great :) hope you finde some ways that fits with your ideas



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