Title

It's his boss. he's late for work.

by C.King
Storyline Ten Villains
Characters Spider-Man
Category Marvel and DC
Previous Chapter Peter woke up and noticed his changes....

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 Max Modell was on the phone as Peter moved and picked it up on the fourth ring, "Peter, your late. I hope you have a heck of a good reason why you're not here today."

 Peter spoke, "Sorry Max. Something's wrong with me, I was just getting ready to see a doctor. After phoning work first. I hope that's okay."

 "I think you're right Mr. Parker. You voice sounds different, a little deeper then normal. I hope you're not getting a cold or something, sir." answered Max, as Peter was surprised by two things.

 One, his voice was deeper then normal. It was still recognizable as Peter's voice, but it was deeper. Smoothier. Silkier. What he didn't know was the Alpha Male force had not stopped change Peter. It had also altered his vocal cords, so it produce an Alpha Male version of Peter's voice, which explained the deepness. It was the exact sonic tones which produced something similar to the Brown Note. The Barry White Note, which made it so women had to stop themselves from coming in their pants at just a single vibration of the cords. It also had another, non-Barry White effect, where men became intimidated. More likely to act submissive and agreeable to the speaker. Which explained point two which surprised Peter, as his boss was suddenly acting like Peter was in charge rather then Max.

 "I'll talk to you after I see someone about this... cold." asked Peter, as he tried to figure out what was happening to him.

 "Whatever you say, sir. Talk to you later, Mr. Parker." said Max as he seem wait for Peter to hang up, which the hero did. Then he tried to figure out who he could see about... this.


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colleem - 12/5/2016 5:21 AM
Master. Question in story board
Master_Kind - 12/4/2016 9:06 PM
Thanks! :)
colleem - 12/4/2016 7:14 AM
Masterkind :) Really like your Idea
extreme1 - 12/2/2016 6:05 PM
I start a new story and the site goes down...coincidence or the universe giving it's opinion on the story???
gothamalleyviper - 12/2/2016 5:04 PM
We shall see.
colleem - 12/2/2016 1:58 PM
wuhuuuu working again... i bet.... it will be 8 days until the next crash
gothamalleyviper - 11/26/2016 10:08 AM
For world's end Harem, who should be the first to get pregnant?
exidor455 - 11/26/2016 5:45 AM
CorruptionCentral - No problem. Sorry for being snippy! :)
extreme1 - 11/26/2016 12:10 AM
gothamalleyviper, thanks (well really thanks to colleem who suggested that I not reveal every buyer at once). There's a thread on the message board if anyone wants to talk about any ideas or has any feedback.
gothamalleyviper - 11/25/2016 10:53 PM
Interesting start on X-Men Extreme1



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