Title

It's his boss. he's late for work.

by C.King
Storyline Ten Villains
Characters Spider-Man
Category Marvel and DC
Previous Chapter Peter woke up and noticed his changes....

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 Max Modell was on the phone as Peter moved and picked it up on the fourth ring, "Peter, your late. I hope you have a heck of a good reason why you're not here today."

 Peter spoke, "Sorry Max. Something's wrong with me, I was just getting ready to see a doctor. After phoning work first. I hope that's okay."

 "I think you're right Mr. Parker. You voice sounds different, a little deeper then normal. I hope you're not getting a cold or something, sir." answered Max, as Peter was surprised by two things.

 One, his voice was deeper then normal. It was still recognizable as Peter's voice, but it was deeper. Smoothier. Silkier. What he didn't know was the Alpha Male force had not stopped change Peter. It had also altered his vocal cords, so it produce an Alpha Male version of Peter's voice, which explained the deepness. It was the exact sonic tones which produced something similar to the Brown Note. The Barry White Note, which made it so women had to stop themselves from coming in their pants at just a single vibration of the cords. It also had another, non-Barry White effect, where men became intimidated. More likely to act submissive and agreeable to the speaker. Which explained point two which surprised Peter, as his boss was suddenly acting like Peter was in charge rather then Max.

 "I'll talk to you after I see someone about this... cold." asked Peter, as he tried to figure out what was happening to him.

 "Whatever you say, sir. Talk to you later, Mr. Parker." said Max as he seem wait for Peter to hang up, which the hero did. Then he tried to figure out who he could see about... this.


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Darth Elsa - 6/23/2016 10:52 PM
If anyone wants to add a Chapter to "Wasp: Devilish Woman" go on ahead.
Darth Elsa - 6/23/2016 7:27 PM
Alright, got a new idea for a story up. Will try and do something with Meanest Bitch soon. Sorry for the rushed pace of this first chapter, really tired my best to make it as good as I could
gothamalleyviper - 6/20/2016 1:27 PM
Posted, feed back welcomed
ESchorcho - 6/19/2016 11:35 PM
gothamalleyviper, check the message board. Could use your thoughts on Rubber Queen. Thanks.
Darth Elsa - 6/19/2016 9:02 PM
Will try and write something tomorrow, have had some writters block
gothamalleyviper - 6/19/2016 1:08 PM
Put thoughts in message board
CorruptionCentral - 6/19/2016 12:31 PM
GAV, Interesting topic for the Riddler. I would be interested in seeing what you're thinking.
CorruptionCentral - 6/19/2016 12:30 PM
Hyperion, I love the new additions to the Hydro-Woman story. Keep up the good work.
colleem - 6/19/2016 12:03 PM
gotham :) do not know enough of the riddler and do not find him very cool :) but your always welcome in one of mine ^^
gothamalleyviper - 6/19/2016 11:10 AM
Had a thought, anyone interested in a Edward Nimga / Riddler Harem building story? Also anyone want me to work on any particular stories?



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