Title

It's his boss. he's late for work.

by C.King
Storyline Ten Villains
Characters Spider-Man
Category Marvel and DC
Previous Chapter Peter woke up and noticed his changes....

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 Max Modell was on the phone as Peter moved and picked it up on the fourth ring, "Peter, your late. I hope you have a heck of a good reason why you're not here today."

 Peter spoke, "Sorry Max. Something's wrong with me, I was just getting ready to see a doctor. After phoning work first. I hope that's okay."

 "I think you're right Mr. Parker. You voice sounds different, a little deeper then normal. I hope you're not getting a cold or something, sir." answered Max, as Peter was surprised by two things.

 One, his voice was deeper then normal. It was still recognizable as Peter's voice, but it was deeper. Smoothier. Silkier. What he didn't know was the Alpha Male force had not stopped change Peter. It had also altered his vocal cords, so it produce an Alpha Male version of Peter's voice, which explained the deepness. It was the exact sonic tones which produced something similar to the Brown Note. The Barry White Note, which made it so women had to stop themselves from coming in their pants at just a single vibration of the cords. It also had another, non-Barry White effect, where men became intimidated. More likely to act submissive and agreeable to the speaker. Which explained point two which surprised Peter, as his boss was suddenly acting like Peter was in charge rather then Max.

 "I'll talk to you after I see someone about this... cold." asked Peter, as he tried to figure out what was happening to him.

 "Whatever you say, sir. Talk to you later, Mr. Parker." said Max as he seem wait for Peter to hang up, which the hero did. Then he tried to figure out who he could see about... this.


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C.King - 3/26/2015 8:17 AM
With Random Romance...Blue Man says it's an everything mixed universe, but it seems more like Marvel/DC. Should I try a true everything universe, splinter off into new realms outside the big two... or both?
q - 3/18/2015 9:47 PM
Have ideas for others, will add more options later
misbegotten2 - 3/18/2015 4:53 PM
ESchorcho: sure
ESchorcho - 3/18/2015 2:58 PM
misbegotten2, loved the new chapter. I will try to add to it soon. Do you want to start a thread in the message board about the storyline?
misbegotten2 - 3/18/2015 12:42 AM
ESchorcho-I'll have a new chapter for the Buffy Fuckdoll Finishing School up either Wed or Thurs.
misbegotten2 - 3/12/2015 11:24 AM
ESchorcho, just got my Computer back this week and I'll be able add a chapter in a few days.
ESchorcho - 3/11/2015 9:48 PM
misbegotton2, I will be a while with a Fuckdoll Finishing School chapter so if your computer is fixed please feel free to post something.
q - 3/8/2015 10:12 PM
I don't anticipate doing much with King's Pendant besides one more episode for one more idea I have.
CorruptionCentral - 3/4/2015 9:22 PM
CJ, Good to see you posting again & nice start to a new twist on the Susan Storm's Secret Life
ESchorcho - 3/4/2015 7:39 PM
I am pretty busy but I'll see what I can do.



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