Title

It's his boss. he's late for work.

by C.King
Storyline Ten Villains
Characters Spider-Man
Category Marvel and DC
Previous Chapter Peter woke up and noticed his changes....

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 Max Modell was on the phone as Peter moved and picked it up on the fourth ring, "Peter, your late. I hope you have a heck of a good reason why you're not here today."

 Peter spoke, "Sorry Max. Something's wrong with me, I was just getting ready to see a doctor. After phoning work first. I hope that's okay."

 "I think you're right Mr. Parker. You voice sounds different, a little deeper then normal. I hope you're not getting a cold or something, sir." answered Max, as Peter was surprised by two things.

 One, his voice was deeper then normal. It was still recognizable as Peter's voice, but it was deeper. Smoothier. Silkier. What he didn't know was the Alpha Male force had not stopped change Peter. It had also altered his vocal cords, so it produce an Alpha Male version of Peter's voice, which explained the deepness. It was the exact sonic tones which produced something similar to the Brown Note. The Barry White Note, which made it so women had to stop themselves from coming in their pants at just a single vibration of the cords. It also had another, non-Barry White effect, where men became intimidated. More likely to act submissive and agreeable to the speaker. Which explained point two which surprised Peter, as his boss was suddenly acting like Peter was in charge rather then Max.

 "I'll talk to you after I see someone about this... cold." asked Peter, as he tried to figure out what was happening to him.

 "Whatever you say, sir. Talk to you later, Mr. Parker." said Max as he seem wait for Peter to hang up, which the hero did. Then he tried to figure out who he could see about... this.


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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