MJ introduces a new girl to the ways of the White Queen's concubines

by Shendude
Storyline Superheroines and Spaceships, Lesbians and Lasers
Characters Mary Jane Watson Batwoman (Kate Kane)
Category Marvel and DC F/F Mind Control
Previous Chapter The champions step forward

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(OOC: I'm not sure I'm really doing you scenario justice LesLes, but I felt it had to be continued...)

Given the White Queen's insatiable appetite for lesbian sex, it was no surprise that she possessed thousands of concubines. And the nature of demographics ensured that many of them were mere Flatscans, utterly lacking in superpowers of any kind. But of those flatscans, very few were counted among her favorites. MJ was the primary exception, a stunning beauty with flaming red locks (just like Jean Grey, the White Queen's First Consort and Vizieress), skilled beyond all others in the arts of pleasure.

Still, though she was favored by the White Queen, MJ was still a Flatscan; and so from time to time she was required to carry out mundane tasks that none of the other concubines could be bothered with. A little less than a month ago, the Domain of Creation had come to Her Majesty's attention when one of Her scouts had encountered one of the Domain's. That ship, had put up a good fight, but the outcome was inevitable, and her captain, Kate Kane was taken prisoner The White Queen had declared that such valor deserved a reward, and ordered that her mind be rewritten to serve Her Majesty.

As a Flatscan, Kane could not be a soldier, but fortunately, she was beautiful enough to make a suitable concubine. And so, the Vizieress' daughter Rachel, the Third Consort, had begun doing battle with Kate Kane's will, and had slowly but surely broken her down and rebuilt her mind from the ground up as a loyal subject of the White Queen. And now that his was done, it fell to MJ to train her new colleague...

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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