Title

MJ introduces a new girl to the ways of the White Queen's concubines

by Shendude
Storyline Superheroines and Spaceships, Lesbians and Lasers
Characters Mary Jane Watson Batwoman (Kate Kane)
Category Marvel and DC F/F Mind Control
Previous Chapter The champions step forward

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(OOC: I'm not sure I'm really doing you scenario justice LesLes, but I felt it had to be continued...)

Given the White Queen's insatiable appetite for lesbian sex, it was no surprise that she possessed thousands of concubines. And the nature of demographics ensured that many of them were mere Flatscans, utterly lacking in superpowers of any kind. But of those flatscans, very few were counted among her favorites. MJ was the primary exception, a stunning beauty with flaming red locks (just like Jean Grey, the White Queen's First Consort and Vizieress), skilled beyond all others in the arts of pleasure.

Still, though she was favored by the White Queen, MJ was still a Flatscan; and so from time to time she was required to carry out mundane tasks that none of the other concubines could be bothered with. A little less than a month ago, the Domain of Creation had come to Her Majesty's attention when one of Her scouts had encountered one of the Domain's. That ship, had put up a good fight, but the outcome was inevitable, and her captain, Kate Kane was taken prisoner The White Queen had declared that such valor deserved a reward, and ordered that her mind be rewritten to serve Her Majesty.

As a Flatscan, Kane could not be a soldier, but fortunately, she was beautiful enough to make a suitable concubine. And so, the Vizieress' daughter Rachel, the Third Consort, had begun doing battle with Kate Kane's will, and had slowly but surely broken her down and rebuilt her mind from the ground up as a loyal subject of the White Queen. And now that his was done, it fell to MJ to train her new colleague...


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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