Title

MJ introduces a new girl to the ways of the White Queen's concubines

by Shendude
Storyline Superheroines and Spaceships, Lesbians and Lasers
Characters Mary Jane Watson Batwoman (Kate Kane)
Category Marvel and DC F/F Mind Control
Previous Chapter The champions step forward

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(OOC: I'm not sure I'm really doing you scenario justice LesLes, but I felt it had to be continued...)

Given the White Queen's insatiable appetite for lesbian sex, it was no surprise that she possessed thousands of concubines. And the nature of demographics ensured that many of them were mere Flatscans, utterly lacking in superpowers of any kind. But of those flatscans, very few were counted among her favorites. MJ was the primary exception, a stunning beauty with flaming red locks (just like Jean Grey, the White Queen's First Consort and Vizieress), skilled beyond all others in the arts of pleasure.

Still, though she was favored by the White Queen, MJ was still a Flatscan; and so from time to time she was required to carry out mundane tasks that none of the other concubines could be bothered with. A little less than a month ago, the Domain of Creation had come to Her Majesty's attention when one of Her scouts had encountered one of the Domain's. That ship, had put up a good fight, but the outcome was inevitable, and her captain, Kate Kane was taken prisoner The White Queen had declared that such valor deserved a reward, and ordered that her mind be rewritten to serve Her Majesty.

As a Flatscan, Kane could not be a soldier, but fortunately, she was beautiful enough to make a suitable concubine. And so, the Vizieress' daughter Rachel, the Third Consort, had begun doing battle with Kate Kane's will, and had slowly but surely broken her down and rebuilt her mind from the ground up as a loyal subject of the White Queen. And now that his was done, it fell to MJ to train her new colleague...


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colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.
gothamalleyviper - 9/14/2014 9:09 PM
Anyone want to toss me some help with a book length project over on message board?



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