Title

MJ introduces a new girl to the ways of the White Queen's concubines

by Shendude
Storyline Superheroines and Spaceships, Lesbians and Lasers
Characters Mary Jane Watson Batwoman (Kate Kane)
Category Marvel and DC F/F Mind Control
Previous Chapter The champions step forward

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(OOC: I'm not sure I'm really doing you scenario justice LesLes, but I felt it had to be continued...)

Given the White Queen's insatiable appetite for lesbian sex, it was no surprise that she possessed thousands of concubines. And the nature of demographics ensured that many of them were mere Flatscans, utterly lacking in superpowers of any kind. But of those flatscans, very few were counted among her favorites. MJ was the primary exception, a stunning beauty with flaming red locks (just like Jean Grey, the White Queen's First Consort and Vizieress), skilled beyond all others in the arts of pleasure.

Still, though she was favored by the White Queen, MJ was still a Flatscan; and so from time to time she was required to carry out mundane tasks that none of the other concubines could be bothered with. A little less than a month ago, the Domain of Creation had come to Her Majesty's attention when one of Her scouts had encountered one of the Domain's. That ship, had put up a good fight, but the outcome was inevitable, and her captain, Kate Kane was taken prisoner The White Queen had declared that such valor deserved a reward, and ordered that her mind be rewritten to serve Her Majesty.

As a Flatscan, Kane could not be a soldier, but fortunately, she was beautiful enough to make a suitable concubine. And so, the Vizieress' daughter Rachel, the Third Consort, had begun doing battle with Kate Kane's will, and had slowly but surely broken her down and rebuilt her mind from the ground up as a loyal subject of the White Queen. And now that his was done, it fell to MJ to train her new colleague...


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noname002j - 2/19/2017 3:54 PM
No luck. I tried that multiple times and keep getting an error message when I resubmit. It says there no room on the disk. I'll keep trying, but if it doesn't work in a couple days, I'll just have try reposting it again.
CorruptionCentral - 2/19/2017 2:56 PM
noname002j: You can fix your title. Click on the storyline for Miss Muscle (Left panel). From there you can edit chapter and add a title.
e1993 - 2/19/2017 1:11 PM

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colleem - 2/19/2017 2:33 AM
Aye. Have the same Problems as you have Solar. When my Story reach a specific length it is over :(
noname002j - 2/18/2017 10:27 PM
Nope, your not I'm having similar issues updating the Miss Muscle chapter I wrote, having screwed up the title link.
extreme1 - 2/18/2017 10:25 PM
SolarSearcher, The most characters from any of my recent chapters was a Gambit the Pimp chapter that had 13,000 words and that posted fine. That being said, I think Colleem was having similar problems.
Solarsearcher - 2/18/2017 9:22 PM
No, my issue is a server error that doesn't let me post a chapter of 25,000 characters, nor does it allow me to update any chapters I post. Am I alone in this regard?
gothamalleyviper - 2/18/2017 3:08 PM
If I do start a round the calander Holiday love slave story do we want to see Dipuc done as read?
ESchorcho - 2/18/2017 2:03 PM
I have a lot of success using Google Chrome.



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