Title

Johnny Storm wakes up in bed hungover next to a supermodel

by Anzaleth
Storyline Let the Music Move You
Characters Human Torch Invisible Woman
Category Marvel Corruption Mind Control Female Dom M/F
Previous Chapter Susan takes the money from the girls

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Johnny Storm moaned and rubbed his forehead as he slowly opened his eyes. He was so hungover and his head was killing him.

Beside him on the bed slept the supermodel whose name he couldn't remember. Her phone was ringing, the ringtone was Shania Twain's "Man! I feel like a woman!"

"The girls need a break-tonight we're gonna take
The chance to get out on the town
We don't need romance-we only wanna dance
We're gonna let our hair hang down

The best thing about being a woman
Is the prerogative to have a little fun."

* * *

As the lucky businessman sucked one of Susan's big, fat nipples, she dialed Namor's number.

"MMmm, hello, Namor, how are you?" she purred. "I really need to talk to you. Could you come over?"

She glanced down at her new fuckslave. Susan would probably have the businessman sign over most of his money to her and then maybe keep him leashed and in a cage. Just a conversation piece.

But Namor, he would be a lot more fun....

* * *

Johnny Storm moaned as the song continued, filling him with all sorts of lovely images: dancing, shopping, making out with hunky studs....

"Oh, oh, oh, go totally crazy-forget I'm a lady
Men's shirts-short skirts
Oh, oh, oh, really go wild-yeah, doin' it in style
Oh, oh, oh, get in the action-feel the attraction
Color my hair-do what I dare
Oh, oh, oh, I wanna be free-yeah, to feel the way I feel
Man! I feel like a woman!"


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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