Title

Johnny Storm wakes up in bed hungover next to a supermodel

by Anzaleth
Storyline Let the Music Move You
Characters Human Torch Invisible Woman
Category Marvel Corruption Mind Control Female Dom M/F
Previous Chapter Susan takes the money from the girls

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Johnny Storm moaned and rubbed his forehead as he slowly opened his eyes. He was so hungover and his head was killing him.

Beside him on the bed slept the supermodel whose name he couldn't remember. Her phone was ringing, the ringtone was Shania Twain's "Man! I feel like a woman!"

"The girls need a break-tonight we're gonna take
The chance to get out on the town
We don't need romance-we only wanna dance
We're gonna let our hair hang down

The best thing about being a woman
Is the prerogative to have a little fun."

* * *

As the lucky businessman sucked one of Susan's big, fat nipples, she dialed Namor's number.

"MMmm, hello, Namor, how are you?" she purred. "I really need to talk to you. Could you come over?"

She glanced down at her new fuckslave. Susan would probably have the businessman sign over most of his money to her and then maybe keep him leashed and in a cage. Just a conversation piece.

But Namor, he would be a lot more fun....

* * *

Johnny Storm moaned as the song continued, filling him with all sorts of lovely images: dancing, shopping, making out with hunky studs....

"Oh, oh, oh, go totally crazy-forget I'm a lady
Men's shirts-short skirts
Oh, oh, oh, really go wild-yeah, doin' it in style
Oh, oh, oh, get in the action-feel the attraction
Color my hair-do what I dare
Oh, oh, oh, I wanna be free-yeah, to feel the way I feel
Man! I feel like a woman!"


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gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.
Fanfic Fetishist - 4/18/2014 10:06 PM
I hope everyone's been enjoying my Ben 10 story so far.
Grimmer - 4/17/2014 2:53 PM
A great chapter C. King! Expect a She Hulk chapter from me today and maybe one continuing either the Circe/Catwoman/Amora option or Poison Ivy.
Gorel - 4/16/2014 9:56 PM
No worries Gothamalleyviper, late night sugar binges are good muses for writing.



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