Title

Johnny Storm wakes up in bed hungover next to a supermodel

by Anzaleth
Storyline Let the Music Move You
Characters Human Torch Invisible Woman
Category Marvel Corruption Mind Control Female Dom M/F
Previous Chapter Susan takes the money from the girls

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Johnny Storm moaned and rubbed his forehead as he slowly opened his eyes. He was so hungover and his head was killing him.

Beside him on the bed slept the supermodel whose name he couldn't remember. Her phone was ringing, the ringtone was Shania Twain's "Man! I feel like a woman!"

"The girls need a break-tonight we're gonna take
The chance to get out on the town
We don't need romance-we only wanna dance
We're gonna let our hair hang down

The best thing about being a woman
Is the prerogative to have a little fun."

* * *

As the lucky businessman sucked one of Susan's big, fat nipples, she dialed Namor's number.

"MMmm, hello, Namor, how are you?" she purred. "I really need to talk to you. Could you come over?"

She glanced down at her new fuckslave. Susan would probably have the businessman sign over most of his money to her and then maybe keep him leashed and in a cage. Just a conversation piece.

But Namor, he would be a lot more fun....

* * *

Johnny Storm moaned as the song continued, filling him with all sorts of lovely images: dancing, shopping, making out with hunky studs....

"Oh, oh, oh, go totally crazy-forget I'm a lady
Men's shirts-short skirts
Oh, oh, oh, really go wild-yeah, doin' it in style
Oh, oh, oh, get in the action-feel the attraction
Color my hair-do what I dare
Oh, oh, oh, I wanna be free-yeah, to feel the way I feel
Man! I feel like a woman!"


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ESchorcho - 8/19/2017 10:56 AM
GAV, I loved your chapters. The storyline has a lot of potential. As for ruleradvent's addition, I'm confused. Don't get me wrong, it was well written but it doesn't seem to flow from the other chapters. Am I missing something?
gothamalleyviper - 8/18/2017 1:52 PM
Any feed back is welcome.
Gorel - 8/17/2017 7:17 AM
Phew... Been a while. Let me know if anyone wants to add or give feedback.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 8:27 AM
No prob ESchorcho - just laying out some options for where things could go next. I hope you get time to write something soon. :)
ESchorcho - 8/15/2017 6:25 AM
Thanks for adding to the Mephisto storyline, exidor455 and great work! I'll try to work on chapters coming up here. I've been pretty busy recently but will try to write something for it.
exidor455 - 8/15/2017 1:28 AM
I'm having a go at getting SSSL/Mephisto moving again. :)
colleem - 8/13/2017 1:36 AM
@King :) Everything works here (execpt the Homepage itself^^) The only wish i had would be a writer that puts some effort into the Story. Background length character depth and so on :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:07 PM
Sorry Ruleradvent, I was a bit shitty there. But I hate non-chapters. If you're going to write something, write something. :)
exidor455 - 8/12/2017 6:00 PM
Ruleradvent - figure out how this works. It's not rocket science.
kingofthefarmyard1 - 8/12/2017 11:08 AM
I might try my hand at a new story. Any suggestions?



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