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Armin Zola lead Johann Schmidt (The Red Skull) to the huge room under the castle which contained tube after tube of cloning vats. Each vat contained a clone of a new member of the Red Skull's latest plan.
"Interesting idea of reviving the old Lebensborn program of our old leader Hitler. With the benefit of having an elite Schutzstaffel as well which will
boosted by the subjects natural abilities, training and powers." said Zola as he looked at a screen showing some of the 'donors' which he had secretly collected with mutated bio-mechanical insects.
Images of The Invisible Woman, Emma Frost the White Queen, The Black Cat, Mockingbird, Sharon Carter, Ms. Marvel, Moonstone, The Black Widows, She-hulk, Spider-woman Jessica Drew, Rogue, Jean Grey and more...
In the tubes were the duplicate of these women with the same powers and abilities, dressed in fetish latex hybrids of Nazi uniforms and their superhero/supervillain costumes.
'Guessing our good Herr Skull has a fetish for latex and blondes. I don't question as long as I get to clone the ladies... and I will get laid eventually.' thought the mutant scientist as even he needed his wick wetted once and a while.
"Their education is coming along well enough?" asked the Skull as he looked at the bar listing how long they had left before they were at youthful breeding age of eighteen.
"All based on the templates constructed personally by you, along the lines you thought were of most value. They will come out thinking in the Nazi ideology of a Master Race ruling over a Fourth Reich lasting a thousand years, of the strong mentally and physically
dominating over all they can see. With the strongest members ruling over the Master Race, no matter what. As you have ordered!" told the man with his head in his body.
"Excellent. Now if the growing is complete, and the mental training of both the best SS training and the film of their originals used by Taskmaster himself, prepare to..." started the Skull,
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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