Title

Susan tricks Johnny into a trap, where Storm is waiting.

by Anzaleth
Storyline Hive of the Wasp
Characters Invisible Woman Ms. Marvel She-carnage Storm Human Torch
Category Marvel Corruption Female Dom
Previous Chapter Susan and Storm find Johnny

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"Holy shit!" Johnny yelled as a blue fireball smacked him in the back.

"Hot enough for you?" Susan sneered. "I guess you're not as fireproof as you thought."

"Susan, what--"

"Flame on, bro!"

He evaded one of her bursts of flame, and whipped down the hallway, trying to figure out what to do.

Suddenly a bolt of lightening smashed him in in the chest, sending him toppling to the ground.

"Good shot, Storm!" Sue grinned. "So, you wanna have some fun with him before we take him back?"

* * *

"Tag!"

"What?" Ms. Marvel stared at the red webbing that was suddenly wrapped around her hand.

"She-Carnage wants to play!"


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JimmyKasche - 7/21/2017 2:39 AM
I've been a bit busy in real life... which is why my chapters kinda stalled... when I finally got time to write... I got sick and my brain doesn't wanna focus :P
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:56 PM
Actually let me know if there's another story you want me to add or continue... Got so many ;)
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:54 PM
Well I'll try to post She-Hulk; Going Native some time this weekend. Unless anyone else would like to.
colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.



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