Title

Susan and Storm find Johnny

by Sailor Mercury
Storyline Hive of the Wasp
Characters Invisible Woman
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Previous Chapter She-Venom has her way with Spidey.

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Storm and Susan looked through the Baxter Building. Searching for Susan's brother, Johnny a.k.a. the Human Torch.

"There he is." Susan said, finding him in the building's training room. She made Storm invisible again and got ready to start the first step of her plan to take down her brother, as was her queen's command.

"Hey, bro!" a voice said. He looked over and saw Sue.

"Sis, hey where ya been? Reed's thinking you were taken by Hornet Queen" Johnny said.

"Oh, I've been, 'out'," she said "and I learned a few tricks."

"Oh, so I really guess you CAN teach an old dog new tricks. Johnny said laughing.

"Ha, ha, ha." Susan said sarcastically. "You think your just such 'hot stuff', don't you?"

"Well I am flammin hot!" he said.

"All YOU are is just a 'hot head'. Let me show you why I am much hotter than you." Sue said with a chuckle. She had to admit, even though she hated hearing Johnny's 'fire' jokes, they were fun to say.

Before Johnny's eyes his sister erupted into flames into a fire-like form of herself made of blue flames. "Now let's see just who's the hotter sibling." she said, as she began to fly, and launched a large blast of blue flames at him.


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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