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~Professor! Where are you?~
Erica and Charlie squealed as the voice passed through them, giving both of the drag queens an intense headache.
~Professor, you're needed!~
Charlie glanced at his lover and showbiz partner. Charlie remembered now, that he was a superhero and teacher, helping to protect mutants and help regular people. That was so -- tedious!
He'd always been unhappy as Charles Xavier, never able to have fun. Now Charlie's life revolved around the "three s's": style, singing, and, of course, sex.
Should he answer or hope she goes away. Charlie felt a certain responsibility for Jean, but also felt that prude wouldn't approve of what his wonderful life had become.
* * *
"May I introduce my lovely 'sister' Petra? You knew her as Quicksilver."
"Ah do declare, what an adorable gal," Clara said as Petra curtsied.
Robert licked his lips, Petra sure had a sweet ass and a real cute face.
"Sit by me, Petra dear," Wanda said. She tapped her nails against the arm-rest. "Clara, where's that maid of yours with the rest of the food?"
Then the doorbell rang.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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