Title

Something Else

by jessiesgirl
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Maria Hill Invisible Woman
Category F/F Mind Control
Previous Chapter Regretting coming into the salon

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These new sensations Susan was feeling made her a little woozy.  She didn't realize that it was another side effect of the shampoo. 

Not only did it make you docile but it' also imprinted anything on the user.
"Now then Agent Storm..."  Hill began droning on.  Susan wasn't really aying attention.  She was wonderng why Hill was calling her an agent.   
Susan wasn't an agent, she was part of the Fantastic 4.  But why did that sound false.
No she's always been a member of SHIELD.   One of her missions was was to monitor Reed Richards.  Being exposed to cosmic rays complicated things sure but she was made to stay undercover for fear of what the team could do.  Even if that meant growing out her short hair and being separated from her real love...Maria.
Wait she wasn't gay...she loved Reed...she was mother to his children.
No that was  part of her cover.  Something she hated but went through with for the good of the mission.
Everything Hill said was sinking in.  Memories were changing.  Her years at being with Reed changed to her ties with Maria.  The library and locker room escapades.  The declarations of love..even the exchange of vows.  She wasn't Susan Storm-Richards...she was Susan Storm-Hill.
As the fog in her mind cleared Susan realized her new reality "Oh Maria I'm so sorry how could I forget you and what we've been through.  Please forgive me".  She asked as she embraced her lover.
"It's okay Susie, we're together again" Maria said as she stroked her lovers short hair.  "now that you're back to your old self, we can get back at your "husband" for keeping us apart.


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Meddler - 5/12/2016 8:22 PM
Informal poll: are there any underused characters you'd like to see in a story? They don't have to be obscure, just people who don't typically get attention on SuperStories.
Meddler - 5/9/2016 10:58 PM
Nevermind, got it.
Meddler - 5/9/2016 10:54 PM
Revived an old storyline. Seeing if it goes anywhere. Also, I'm having some trouble with the fonts.
exidor455 - 5/9/2016 10:33 AM
Posted new chapters of SSAT and SSSL! Hope you like them. :)
Darth Elsa - 5/8/2016 8:17 PM
College is finishing up this week. Going to try and get something out Saturday
colleem - 5/7/2016 5:49 AM
Exidor, look at the Message Board. Started a new Idea there. Would like to here your Ideas
Gorel - 5/6/2016 10:24 AM
Hey mcont44 if you want to add to Satyr Silliness go right ahead :)
tmon6219 - 5/6/2016 8:44 AM
I love the Cutter Creek WW story.
colleem - 5/4/2016 6:04 AM
May the Forth be with you :)
Darth Elsa - 5/3/2016 7:44 PM
Sorry for not o\posting. Have been taking a college course. It is wrapping up so I have lots of work and have not been able to do much. Will try and get something soon.



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