Title

Regretting coming into the salon

by jessiesgirl
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Invisible Woman Maria Hill
Category F/F Marvel
Previous Chapter Hers. A nice short crop

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As she was turned around Susan Storm was in for the shock of her life.


"What have you done to me?" She said as she reached up and touched what was left of her once glorious hair and started to cry.

"She did everything I asked her to Susan." Maria Hill said as she came out of the other room.

Susan wasn't happy about these turn of events and now that Maria Hill was involved she got a bad feeling that this was only the beginning.  As she got out of the salon chair Susan confronted the agent "This was all YOUR idea? Why?"

"Because Susan I have been in love with you since the moment we met.  I know you'll love me the way I love you but I wanted you to know how I felt."

"And chopping my hair like yours was to show your love for me too."

"No i just think you look sexy as hell with short hair'." As Maria said this Susan instinctively moved her hands through her short hair.  She didn't know why but she could have sworn she was getting turned on by all of this.


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colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.
gothamalleyviper - 9/14/2014 9:09 PM
Anyone want to toss me some help with a book length project over on message board?



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