Title

Regretting coming into the salon

by jessiesgirl
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Invisible Woman Maria Hill
Category F/F Marvel
Previous Chapter Hers. A nice short crop

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As she was turned around Susan Storm was in for the shock of her life.


"What have you done to me?" She said as she reached up and touched what was left of her once glorious hair and started to cry.

"She did everything I asked her to Susan." Maria Hill said as she came out of the other room.

Susan wasn't happy about these turn of events and now that Maria Hill was involved she got a bad feeling that this was only the beginning.  As she got out of the salon chair Susan confronted the agent "This was all YOUR idea? Why?"

"Because Susan I have been in love with you since the moment we met.  I know you'll love me the way I love you but I wanted you to know how I felt."

"And chopping my hair like yours was to show your love for me too."

"No i just think you look sexy as hell with short hair'." As Maria said this Susan instinctively moved her hands through her short hair.  She didn't know why but she could have sworn she was getting turned on by all of this.


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ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 7:21 AM
Nice work, exidor455 on the new Susan Storm's Secret Life chapter. I really enjoy this storyline. Thanks for keeping it going.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 4:25 AM
Added a new chapter to Susan Storm's Secret Life - Mephisto thread. :)
XFAN - 7/20/2014 8:09 PM
If you head over to Hypnopics C.King there is a decent Queen Bee story.
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C.King - 7/20/2014 3:35 PM
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