Title

Regretting coming into the salon

by jessiesgirl
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Invisible Woman Maria Hill
Category F/F Marvel
Previous Chapter Hers. A nice short crop

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As she was turned around Susan Storm was in for the shock of her life.


"What have you done to me?" She said as she reached up and touched what was left of her once glorious hair and started to cry.

"She did everything I asked her to Susan." Maria Hill said as she came out of the other room.

Susan wasn't happy about these turn of events and now that Maria Hill was involved she got a bad feeling that this was only the beginning.  As she got out of the salon chair Susan confronted the agent "This was all YOUR idea? Why?"

"Because Susan I have been in love with you since the moment we met.  I know you'll love me the way I love you but I wanted you to know how I felt."

"And chopping my hair like yours was to show your love for me too."

"No i just think you look sexy as hell with short hair'." As Maria said this Susan instinctively moved her hands through her short hair.  She didn't know why but she could have sworn she was getting turned on by all of this.


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Helen-Troy - 1/23/2017 12:56 PM
Replied Colleem!
colleem - 1/23/2017 11:50 AM
Helen-troy :) have a Question on the Massage Board
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 9:32 AM
As soon as I brought the Corruptor over, my laptop key board went ka-put, so Don't expect much until next week when I get a new one.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 6:33 AM
And the first chapter of the story has been brought over. Now we see where it goes on here.
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:57 AM
Helen-Troy, I understand how you feel. RL politics always brings out the most polarizing elements. Most of the writers I've had contact with here would take it as intended, but there are FAR more readers and where They might take it is where the s--- s
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:50 AM
Extreme1, people put stories from here on other sites a lot. If it's your story, there's no question you can put it where you want. If it's someone else's, I'd ask first and add a line at the top stating who wrote it & where it was from, but it's up to
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 5:06 AM
Question: would it be ok to bring a story (well the first chapter) from another site? I've got a long dead story from BE's Addventures that I'd like to see this place's take on.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:31 AM
site, the bad guys don't lose often lol. Not sure if I'll add anything, but, if it keeps going, I'll keep checking it out.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:28 AM
Helen-Troy Understandable, it read to me as satire. But, I also think this particular election hit on some really deep schisms so people are understandably raw right now (As a Mexican-American, it's been a fucking nightmare). Also, LBR, on this sit
colleem - 1/23/2017 4:17 AM
Aye. But somehow he is the Luck one who gets what he wants so he is the Hero. I see him only as possible funny side Char



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