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The Invisible Wizard prepares her trap

by burke_rakers
Storyline The Body-Melding Ray
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"Sue? Why are you in my lab? And why are you wearing that outfit? Is something wrong?"

Susan Wittman (who wore the Wizards pink and purple battle armor) hated having her name shortened like that. If a way, it was as if she were diminished. As if she was being negated. For that matter, shouldn't this be HER lab? She was more certain that ever...that she had to do this.

She turned, and Reed saw her face (something different about her) set into a cocky, arrogant smirk. "Well, 'honey'...let's just say that I've decided that I would be better suited to lead the team. Oh, by the way...we're the Frightful Four now."

"Sue...Susie...honey...you need to calm down and let me examine you. Somethings wrong..."

She sneared and rolled her eyes, lighting a cigarette and saying with a voice that dripped with contempt "Oh, for pitys sake...you are so very lucky that I love you, Reed. If not, I'd prove my greater genius by blasting you into atoms. My name's Susan Wittman. Not 'Sue' or 'Susie' and certainly not 'Honey'. I'm Susan Wittman, soon to be feared the world over as The Invisible Wizard. And as for you..."

Susan gestured, and Reed found himself wrapped in waves of invisible force.

"There, you see. The power of my invisible forcefield has captured you...just as my matchless intellect has unlocked the secret of the Melding Wand. Behold, Richards...as I show you just how much I understand my current - and quite permanent - condition."

Susan Wittman pressed a button on her gauntlets, and a wand-like device extended from her hand. She smiled - arrogant and haughty - as she explained that her Frightful Four would only be needing ONE genius...and that she'd found the perfect template for him.

"SUE! For heavens sake, take a deep breath and THINK about what you're doing!"

Susan smiled, and waved the wand in his direction.

***

The loving had been good. Very good. Susan Wittman was pleased she'd chosen such an appropriate and inspired (if unexpected) villainess to combine her husband with. The Wizards had been a rampant pussyhound, and Susan found she liked the female form...

Behind her, her wife Ruriko Richards-Wittman (aka Mrs Steel Wind) sauntered from the bedroom, her desires obvious. She looked very much like the Japanese-American villainess and old foe of Ghost Rider. Tall, asian, athletic and more than half-cybernetic, her purple-dyed hair had Reeds white-at-the-temples look...but little else of his appearance.

"You were magnificent, Susan..." she said, as she removed the vibrating penis-shaped attatchment her wife had made for her. She was a cybernetic warrior with metalic legs, arms and lower torso, which could attach to her cyber-cycle. She also had Reeds old streatching ability, but now it was due to her telescoping cybernetic limbs, torso and neck. A dangerious physical opponant and transportation expert, she had very little knowledge of how her cybernetic parts worked. Thinking was Susans job.

"I'm glad you think so, Ruriko. By the way, what do YOU think I should do with Reeds genetic and reality-matrix information? It's still stored in my own Melding Wand...which I suppose I should call the Melding Ray.

For a momant, Rurikos' face showed an inner battle. Then...she smiled, slipped an long-nailed hand into her purple-leather pants (where it played with the rubberised lips of her cyber-vagina) and said "Erase it, my love. Let me be Mrs. Steel Wind...forever. I am your plaything. Your toy. Your sexual, seductive wife and partner. But...what about our children?"

Susan erased Reeds information, then smiled. "They'll be fine, Ruriko. They'll be ours. But first...let's finish with our Frightful Four. Now...for my idiot brother..."


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colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.
gothamalleyviper - 9/14/2014 9:09 PM
Anyone want to toss me some help with a book length project over on message board?



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