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The Invisible Wizard prepares her trap

by burke_rakers
Storyline The Body-Melding Ray
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"Sue? Why are you in my lab? And why are you wearing that outfit? Is something wrong?"

Susan Wittman (who wore the Wizards pink and purple battle armor) hated having her name shortened like that. If a way, it was as if she were diminished. As if she was being negated. For that matter, shouldn't this be HER lab? She was more certain that ever...that she had to do this.

She turned, and Reed saw her face (something different about her) set into a cocky, arrogant smirk. "Well, 'honey'...let's just say that I've decided that I would be better suited to lead the team. Oh, by the way...we're the Frightful Four now."

"Sue...Susie...honey...you need to calm down and let me examine you. Somethings wrong..."

She sneared and rolled her eyes, lighting a cigarette and saying with a voice that dripped with contempt "Oh, for pitys sake...you are so very lucky that I love you, Reed. If not, I'd prove my greater genius by blasting you into atoms. My name's Susan Wittman. Not 'Sue' or 'Susie' and certainly not 'Honey'. I'm Susan Wittman, soon to be feared the world over as The Invisible Wizard. And as for you..."

Susan gestured, and Reed found himself wrapped in waves of invisible force.

"There, you see. The power of my invisible forcefield has captured you...just as my matchless intellect has unlocked the secret of the Melding Wand. Behold, Richards...as I show you just how much I understand my current - and quite permanent - condition."

Susan Wittman pressed a button on her gauntlets, and a wand-like device extended from her hand. She smiled - arrogant and haughty - as she explained that her Frightful Four would only be needing ONE genius...and that she'd found the perfect template for him.

"SUE! For heavens sake, take a deep breath and THINK about what you're doing!"

Susan smiled, and waved the wand in his direction.

***

The loving had been good. Very good. Susan Wittman was pleased she'd chosen such an appropriate and inspired (if unexpected) villainess to combine her husband with. The Wizards had been a rampant pussyhound, and Susan found she liked the female form...

Behind her, her wife Ruriko Richards-Wittman (aka Mrs Steel Wind) sauntered from the bedroom, her desires obvious. She looked very much like the Japanese-American villainess and old foe of Ghost Rider. Tall, asian, athletic and more than half-cybernetic, her purple-dyed hair had Reeds white-at-the-temples look...but little else of his appearance.

"You were magnificent, Susan..." she said, as she removed the vibrating penis-shaped attatchment her wife had made for her. She was a cybernetic warrior with metalic legs, arms and lower torso, which could attach to her cyber-cycle. She also had Reeds old streatching ability, but now it was due to her telescoping cybernetic limbs, torso and neck. A dangerious physical opponant and transportation expert, she had very little knowledge of how her cybernetic parts worked. Thinking was Susans job.

"I'm glad you think so, Ruriko. By the way, what do YOU think I should do with Reeds genetic and reality-matrix information? It's still stored in my own Melding Wand...which I suppose I should call the Melding Ray.

For a momant, Rurikos' face showed an inner battle. Then...she smiled, slipped an long-nailed hand into her purple-leather pants (where it played with the rubberised lips of her cyber-vagina) and said "Erase it, my love. Let me be Mrs. Steel Wind...forever. I am your plaything. Your toy. Your sexual, seductive wife and partner. But...what about our children?"

Susan erased Reeds information, then smiled. "They'll be fine, Ruriko. They'll be ours. But first...let's finish with our Frightful Four. Now...for my idiot brother..."


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extreme1 - 12/2/2016 6:05 PM
I start a new story and the site goes down...coincidence or the universe giving it's opinion on the story???
gothamalleyviper - 12/2/2016 5:04 PM
We shall see.
colleem - 12/2/2016 1:58 PM
wuhuuuu working again... i bet.... it will be 8 days until the next crash
gothamalleyviper - 11/26/2016 10:08 AM
For world's end Harem, who should be the first to get pregnant?
exidor455 - 11/26/2016 5:45 AM
CorruptionCentral - No problem. Sorry for being snippy! :)
extreme1 - 11/26/2016 12:10 AM
gothamalleyviper, thanks (well really thanks to colleem who suggested that I not reveal every buyer at once). There's a thread on the message board if anyone wants to talk about any ideas or has any feedback.
gothamalleyviper - 11/25/2016 10:53 PM
Interesting start on X-Men Extreme1
CorruptionCentral - 11/25/2016 3:40 PM
Exidor: Didn't think you were having ago. Thought you were feeling unappreciated on CHYOA & thought I would say I'll be adding there but it will take a while.
extreme1 - 11/24/2016 12:57 PM
I gotta agree with exidor, but then again I'm biased because I have two stories and neither have had anything submitted for them. Whereas Gambit the Pimp has had multiple people work on it (something I'm very thankful for).
exidor455 - 11/24/2016 11:56 AM
Not having ago at you CorruptionCentral. I just get the impression that people at CHYOA read stories that the authors put multiple branches into, unlike here where it's more collaborative. I refer to bounce stories back and forth.



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