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Reed looked at the collected heroes before him as he plotted to open their minds. He and his wife Sue were dressed in their old costume, or so it seemed as they were unstable particles suits he had modified so they could instantly transform into more
The machine had been hidden in the room, along with a device to teleport clothes out of the way, once they came around. The machine effected the people both mentally giving them the mindset of a person from universe 3069, but physically gave them the bonus
of the dimensions sexuality. There was a chance of sexual transformation of males into females, after the initial shot. A weak side effect.
The room was filled with extended members of their family who had been teammates of them. Spider-man, She-Hulk, Medusa, Crystal, Storm, Black Panther, Namorita and Namor, Iron Man, Captain America, Doctor Strange, and Professor X.
"Friends, I have just arrived from a parallel universe which could change the world for the better. I need your help with understanding the new mindset of this universe. I believe your input on this would help us understand how to use this to aid our world.
So I am going to introduce to this new way of thinking. I'll start..." said Reed as he spoke the trigger which H.E.R.B.I.E. to trigger the two machines.
Instantly all the people there began to orgasm intensely as they had their costumes removed. Cocks and balls, breasts and asses began to grow and firm up. Unexpectedly, all of the men in the room save Captain America and Spider-man began to become less masculine,
more feminine as they were transformed into women.
Triggering costume they wore so they became the same clothes which they had entered the universe on their return, Reed asked, "Who wants an Orgy?"
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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