Title

Susan Richards, Invisible Woman, becomes Susie Storm, Invisible Girl

by Anzaleth
Storyline Name Changer
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Marvel Mind Control Transformation
Previous Chapter He transforms Firestar into Pornstar, Angelica Juggs

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It was hard for the Name-Changer to focus too much on using his power when Angelica Juggs was massaging his crotch with her long nails but eventually he invoked his power and....

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Susan Richards sighed as she sat in the living room. Reed had promised her a night out, but once again he had locked himself in his lab.

"Damn it, Reed," she muttered to herself. "I've got needs too. I mean it's -- like, totally unfair 'cause I wanna, like, shake my bootie an'-- what?"

Susan nervously toyed with one of her pigtails. Her voice sounded so weird then. What had happened?

"Um, what's, like, going on? I feel totally weird!"

Was her voice supposed to be that high?

"Gawd, Reed's a total stick-in-the-mud 'cause he's, like, sooo old!"

Susie Storm, the teen sensation known as the Invisible Girl, hopped to her feet.

"Gawd, I'm totally bored and, like, totally horny! Wanna go clubbing and, like, totally jump some bitchin' hunks!"


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C.King - 4/24/2014 9:54 AM
Good Job, Kirayoshi. Good Job. I'll see if I have a story to continue it.
gothamalleyviper - 4/23/2014 7:41 PM
One short, one longer, but hope people provide feed back
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.
Fanfic Fetishist - 4/18/2014 10:06 PM
I hope everyone's been enjoying my Ben 10 story so far.



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