Title

Susan Richards, Invisible Woman, becomes Susie Storm, Invisible Girl

by Anzaleth
Storyline Name Changer
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Marvel Mind Control Transformation
Previous Chapter He transforms Firestar into Pornstar, Angelica Juggs

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It was hard for the Name-Changer to focus too much on using his power when Angelica Juggs was massaging his crotch with her long nails but eventually he invoked his power and....

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Susan Richards sighed as she sat in the living room. Reed had promised her a night out, but once again he had locked himself in his lab.

"Damn it, Reed," she muttered to herself. "I've got needs too. I mean it's -- like, totally unfair 'cause I wanna, like, shake my bootie an'-- what?"

Susan nervously toyed with one of her pigtails. Her voice sounded so weird then. What had happened?

"Um, what's, like, going on? I feel totally weird!"

Was her voice supposed to be that high?

"Gawd, Reed's a total stick-in-the-mud 'cause he's, like, sooo old!"

Susie Storm, the teen sensation known as the Invisible Girl, hopped to her feet.

"Gawd, I'm totally bored and, like, totally horny! Wanna go clubbing and, like, totally jump some bitchin' hunks!"


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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