Susan Richards, Invisible Woman, becomes Susie Storm, Invisible Girl

by Anzaleth
Storyline Name Changer
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Marvel Mind Control Transformation
Previous Chapter He transforms Firestar into Pornstar, Angelica Juggs

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It was hard for the Name-Changer to focus too much on using his power when Angelica Juggs was massaging his crotch with her long nails but eventually he invoked his power and....

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Susan Richards sighed as she sat in the living room. Reed had promised her a night out, but once again he had locked himself in his lab.

"Damn it, Reed," she muttered to herself. "I've got needs too. I mean it's -- like, totally unfair 'cause I wanna, like, shake my bootie an'-- what?"

Susan nervously toyed with one of her pigtails. Her voice sounded so weird then. What had happened?

"Um, what's, like, going on? I feel totally weird!"

Was her voice supposed to be that high?

"Gawd, Reed's a total stick-in-the-mud 'cause he's, like, sooo old!"

Susie Storm, the teen sensation known as the Invisible Girl, hopped to her feet.

"Gawd, I'm totally bored and, like, totally horny! Wanna go clubbing and, like, totally jump some bitchin' hunks!"

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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