Susan Richards - Invisible Woman to Invisible Girl

by Anzaleth
Storyline Name Changer
Characters Emma Frost Invisible Woman
Category Marvel Mind Control Transformation
Previous Chapter Marvel universe

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Susan Richards sighed as she shopped for shoes. There there was so much stuff she had to do with the Fantastic Four, going on adventures, fighting threats, doing presentations. So little time for herself.

"Ooo, those look darling, but a little darling," Susan said. "The heel, perhaps a little long. But, I dunno, those heels are, like, kinda cute."

She ran a nail over it, imagining clunking around in those big platform heels in the Baxter Building, her butt bobbing up and down under her skirt. Reed wouldn't like it though.

"But he's, like, such a fuddy-duddy," Susan giggled. "Not the boss of me!"

She was looking younger, a lot younger. More like a teenager than a mature adult.

"OOoo, that pair's sooo kewt!" Suzie Storm, the Invisible Girl squealed.

The bell tinkled as someone else entered the store.

Emma Frost was feeling a little funny. Something about her outfits seems a little too "old lady." Not up-to-date enough for the White Princess....

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ESchorcho - 11/30/2015 6:57 PM
gothamalleyviper, I'm working on a new Rubber Queen chapter. Look for it in the next few days.
gothamalleyviper - 11/30/2015 10:25 AM
CC, the fix I found was to go back in Internet Explorer and re-do the breaks.
CorruptionCentral - 11/30/2015 8:57 AM
Had the same issue GAV noted posting in Chrome. Tried MS Edge too with same result. Finally copied text into Work and changed font to Times New Roman. That worked, kinda
gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.

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