Title

Susan Richards - Invisible Woman to Invisible Girl

by Anzaleth
Storyline Name Changer
Characters Emma Frost Invisible Woman
Category Marvel Mind Control Transformation
Previous Chapter Marvel universe

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Susan Richards sighed as she shopped for shoes. There there was so much stuff she had to do with the Fantastic Four, going on adventures, fighting threats, doing presentations. So little time for herself.

"Ooo, those look darling, but a little darling," Susan said. "The heel, perhaps a little long. But, I dunno, those heels are, like, kinda cute."

She ran a nail over it, imagining clunking around in those big platform heels in the Baxter Building, her butt bobbing up and down under her skirt. Reed wouldn't like it though.

"But he's, like, such a fuddy-duddy," Susan giggled. "Not the boss of me!"

She was looking younger, a lot younger. More like a teenager than a mature adult.

"OOoo, that pair's sooo kewt!" Suzie Storm, the Invisible Girl squealed.

The bell tinkled as someone else entered the store.

Emma Frost was feeling a little funny. Something about her outfits seems a little too "old lady." Not up-to-date enough for the White Princess....


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Cal512 - 2/21/2017 7:53 PM
Glad that someone else liked my idea, Darth Elsa! I'm more of a slow-burn writer, but was hoping someone would take the second choice!
Gorel - 2/20/2017 6:00 PM
"Something, something cow joke!" "Something, something, sexual innuendo, something cow joke."
Gorel - 2/20/2017 5:57 PM
"Y'all think you can handle this much beef?" Poses for the heroes. "You can't handle these whoppers!"
gothamalleyviper - 2/20/2017 5:48 PM
A call up to the bridge reporting a fight: "We have Udder Madness in the Birthing Bays!"
Gorel - 2/20/2017 5:28 PM
Why the opening scene could have these ladies show up and ask. "Hey buckaroo, wanna rodeo ride?"
Gorel - 2/20/2017 4:58 PM
What's wrong with puns? I mean heck they write themselves.
LesLes - 2/20/2017 4:45 PM
@kingofthefarmyard1, enjoyed your chapter :-)
gothamalleyviper - 2/20/2017 3:27 PM
Gorel, My mother would respond to that with "Oh the puns!"
Gorel - 2/20/2017 3:14 PM
Can't go wrong with cow-girl.
gothamalleyviper - 2/20/2017 1:49 PM
Question for all of you; What species of animal would you like to see as a sexy little bit furry alien?



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