Title

Val wakes-up in horror

by DeMonic
Storyline Marvel Hags & Trolls
Characters
Category Fat
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Valeria Richards, a little girl who in her few short years of life had had more than her fair share of run ins with things weird and dangerous, was jolted awake by a coarse scream and promptly jumped from her bed with an alertness that would have put most Special Forces Soldiers to shame...only to land unusually heavily and almost overbalance.

Just managing to catch herself, Val’s eyes instinctively went to the large mirror on the far wall...and FROZE. Valeria’s mind was preternaturally advanced for her age, not yet even 5 years old and she could already hold her own with the likes of her farther, largely regards as one of the greatest scientific minds EVER...but now that intellect failed her as it simply couldn’t process what she was seeing...

The least of it was that overnight, and for no reason she could comprehend, she had joined the ranks of the Child Obesity Epidemic they were always talking about on the Television; a child of her age and height should weigh roughly 31 lb, and previously she’d hit that almost on the button, now she had noticeably lost some height (probably the extra mass causing her hips to spread, possibly even her spine to compress, some clinical part of Val’s mind noted) and conservatively must weigh TWICE what she had, putting her on the hefty side of what a SEVEN year old should weigh while she was barely more than a toddler!!

Val had gone to bed in a loose pink Hello Kitty T-Shirt and baggy sleep pants, she still wore them but they were no longer loose; now the T-Shirt was pulled tight like a second skin over her new bulk, the sleeves digging into her husky upper arms, a prominent and fleshy gut pushing it up and the image of Hello Kitty stretched into obscene illegible, while her sleep pants looked like lycra bike shorts, desperately trying to contain her massive rear and thighs...

But this was all background, what Val’s eyes were locked on in horror was her FACE; she had been doubly blessed by taking after both her parents, her farther in intellect and her mother in looks, she’d been a genuinely beautiful baby and a pretty little girl...now she had a face only a mother could love...and as she felt a gnawing panic raise in her expanded guts, she couldn’t be too sure of even that...

Her head was now topped with a greasy rat’s nest of tangled black hair, and framed by two absurdly large ears that stood out at almost 90 degrees form her head. Her face was taken up mainly by a massive crooked nose, with huge flared nostrils, and a prominent, dark mono-brow beneath which her eyes were lopsided; the left was slightly lower down than the right, with its eyeball BULGING unpleasantly from its socket, while the right seemed to be drawn almost completely shut.

On her right cheek, a large mole with coarse inch long black hairs sticking out of it, while on the other side of her face she has a severe hair lip exposing her yellowing, slightly crooked upper left canine and much of her gum...

Val’s mind stuttered to a stop, unable to keep listing her suddenly myriad imperfections, and then she did what any little girl, genius and child of superheroes or not, would do....

“MOMMMEEEEEE...”


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colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.
gothamalleyviper - 9/14/2014 9:09 PM
Anyone want to toss me some help with a book length project over on message board?



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