Title

Watch Mandy as not everything is as it appears.

by CJ
Storyline Susan Storm's Secret Life
Characters Invisible Woman
Category Corruption Marvel
Previous Chapter Sue sticks to stripping...for now

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As soon as 'Suzanne' left the bathroom Mandy gave her a minute to make sure she was out of ear range and then pulled her phone out of her purse and place a call. "Yeah, she reacted just like you predicted, but I was able to calm her down and slip her the water bottle you gave me and she drank it all down." Mandy told the person on the other end of the line.

Mandy listened to the other person for a moment and then replied "So you want me and Trixx to keep the guys off her for the rest of the night and try and talk her into meeting up with us tommorow for coffee.......Alright that should be doable, we can use her gratitude from keeping the boys off her to get her to agree easily enough. Later Ralph, got to get back to the floor."

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Ralph sat back in his chair as he hung up the phone after speaking to Mandy. She had succeeded in slipping Sue the drugged water. It wasn't anything harmful and wasn't even illegal though. It was actually a mystic marriage aid. It hieghtened positive emotions and senses. Making good things better, which is why other than obscurity it wasn't a problem getting a hold of it. Most people couldn't figure out how a drug like this could hurt someone so didn't bother restricting sale of it. As he watched Suzanne and Mandy get back on the dance floor he thought everything was going according to his plans.

A party or two like this where he woudl bring in other dancers, another reason for going so slow is that he'd had to find some strippers he could control and didn't have ties to any of the criminal organizations in the city. That had been harder than it sounded but he would be damned if he would let them take his new toy from him and they would if they found out about her. The other strippers would have to carefully act the parts of his script. He wanted one to be her 'friend'(Mandy), and the other to be confrontational and competitive (Trixx).

His idea was after a few jobs together and some bonding to have them open her up to other branches of the business. Specifically he wanted Sue to get into the escort business. He could arrange a few dates for her that were harmless and lower her wariness of the jobs. Then it was just a matter of waiting, the sometimes neglectful relationship between Reed Richards and his wife was something he was familiar with from following the gossip lines for hints of who to investigate for the latest scandel. He would wait until he heard about a rough patch in the marriage and then slip a ringer in for her to escort. He would make sure the client was charming and paid attention to her, maybe a repeat customer so that she would be relaxed around him. Spike a bottle of wine and let things get out of control and then ride out the wave of guilt over betraying her marriage and gently reel her in. Once she had crossed over the line once it would be easy to arrange situations where she would do it again. Maybe some type of competition or incident where Suzanne would experience peer pressure to go the extra distance, possibly aided by a higher dose of the happy enhancer to lower her inhibitions. After she had taken that big step over the line she would be his, especially if he had the video evidence.


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
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colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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