Title

Something Else

by jessiesgirl
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Maria Hill Invisible Woman
Category F/F Mind Control
Previous Chapter Regretting coming into the salon

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These new sensations Susan was feeling made her a little woozy.  She didn't realize that it was another side effect of the shampoo. 

Not only did it make you docile but it' also imprinted anything on the user.
"Now then Agent Storm..."  Hill began droning on.  Susan wasn't really aying attention.  She was wonderng why Hill was calling her an agent.   
Susan wasn't an agent, she was part of the Fantastic 4.  But why did that sound false.
No she's always been a member of SHIELD.   One of her missions was was to monitor Reed Richards.  Being exposed to cosmic rays complicated things sure but she was made to stay undercover for fear of what the team could do.  Even if that meant growing out her short hair and being separated from her real love...Maria.
Wait she wasn't gay...she loved Reed...she was mother to his children.
No that was  part of her cover.  Something she hated but went through with for the good of the mission.
Everything Hill said was sinking in.  Memories were changing.  Her years at being with Reed changed to her ties with Maria.  The library and locker room escapades.  The declarations of love..even the exchange of vows.  She wasn't Susan Storm-Richards...she was Susan Storm-Hill.
As the fog in her mind cleared Susan realized her new reality "Oh Maria I'm so sorry how could I forget you and what we've been through.  Please forgive me".  She asked as she embraced her lover.
"It's okay Susie, we're together again" Maria said as she stroked her lovers short hair.  "now that you're back to your old self, we can get back at your "husband" for keeping us apart.


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Darth Elsa - 5/22/2017 12:04 AM
I got writer's block. Go right ahead and make you if you want.
extreme1 - 5/21/2017 11:56 PM
Good news, the flow of absolute crap from my brain has slowed down so we're all safe...for now!
JimmyKasche - 5/21/2017 10:52 PM
Arm is starting to feel better, hope to get back to writing tomorrow. Hey Darth Elsa you mentioned a Pink Lanterns chapter are you working on one?
Yang Xiao Long - 5/21/2017 9:31 PM
I'm back. Working on a chapter for that Devilish Women story.
Danknoodle420 - 5/20/2017 10:34 PM
I was hoping for some more Symbiote action xD.
Master_Kind - 5/20/2017 6:25 PM
Sorry for the delay - been really busy. Will try to add more to Fucksgiving and Hard Reboot soon.
Gorel - 5/20/2017 2:18 PM
I'm curious if anyone wants to revisit X-Hot-Ic. If so there's a comment in the message board.
Cal512 - 5/20/2017 12:42 PM
Like your take on Gwen's symbiote costume, Darknoodle420!
extreme1 - 5/20/2017 11:02 AM
Alright got a few finished (and soon to be finished) chapters to post this weekend, so let's see if one of these stories can't get some new life breathed into them.



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