Title

Regretting coming into the salon

by jessiesgirl
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Invisible Woman Maria Hill
Category F/F Marvel
Previous Chapter Hers. A nice short crop

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As she was turned around Susan Storm was in for the shock of her life.


"What have you done to me?" She said as she reached up and touched what was left of her once glorious hair and started to cry.

"She did everything I asked her to Susan." Maria Hill said as she came out of the other room.

Susan wasn't happy about these turn of events and now that Maria Hill was involved she got a bad feeling that this was only the beginning.  As she got out of the salon chair Susan confronted the agent "This was all YOUR idea? Why?"

"Because Susan I have been in love with you since the moment we met.  I know you'll love me the way I love you but I wanted you to know how I felt."

"And chopping my hair like yours was to show your love for me too."

"No i just think you look sexy as hell with short hair'." As Maria said this Susan instinctively moved her hands through her short hair.  She didn't know why but she could have sworn she was getting turned on by all of this.


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JimmyKasche - 7/21/2017 2:39 AM
I've been a bit busy in real life... which is why my chapters kinda stalled... when I finally got time to write... I got sick and my brain doesn't wanna focus :P
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:56 PM
Actually let me know if there's another story you want me to add or continue... Got so many ;)
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:54 PM
Well I'll try to post She-Hulk; Going Native some time this weekend. Unless anyone else would like to.
colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.
Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
Now that we are on the subject of constructive criticism... Darknoodle, can you please try to space out your chapters? The wall of text makes it hard to read.
Danknoodle420 - 7/18/2017 10:52 PM
Ruleradvent, could you perhaps use more comas instead of ....? Some places in your chapter doesn't really need that much buildup. Other than that, you're getting there.
extreme1 - 7/17/2017 11:50 AM
The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.



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