Title

Regretting coming into the salon

by jessiesgirl
Storyline New U Salon
Characters Invisible Woman Maria Hill
Category F/F Marvel
Previous Chapter Hers. A nice short crop

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As she was turned around Susan Storm was in for the shock of her life.


"What have you done to me?" She said as she reached up and touched what was left of her once glorious hair and started to cry.

"She did everything I asked her to Susan." Maria Hill said as she came out of the other room.

Susan wasn't happy about these turn of events and now that Maria Hill was involved she got a bad feeling that this was only the beginning.  As she got out of the salon chair Susan confronted the agent "This was all YOUR idea? Why?"

"Because Susan I have been in love with you since the moment we met.  I know you'll love me the way I love you but I wanted you to know how I felt."

"And chopping my hair like yours was to show your love for me too."

"No i just think you look sexy as hell with short hair'." As Maria said this Susan instinctively moved her hands through her short hair.  She didn't know why but she could have sworn she was getting turned on by all of this.


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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