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Skip forward to when the Fantastic Four return...

by MrHookman
Storyline The Manipulator
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The Fantastic Four stepped from the hangar into the main Baxter Building, tired and a little worse-for-wear but otherwise fine. They had gotten mixed up in a dispute between the Skrull and the Kree that had turned violent, nothing unusual for the super-team.


Ben, The Thing, grumbled something about going to bed and headed off down the hallway before suddenly freezing in place.
"What the..." He whispered.
Susan was curious and she peered around Ben's great lumbering form only to gasp and step back.
Walking down the hallway towards them was Crystal, but not the Crystal they knew. She was huge, tall and muscle-bound. She was wearing nothing at all and they could see a gigantic monster of a cock swinging between her legs. The most shocking thing of all though was the young man crawling by her side. He was just as naked as her, his cock hanging down between his thighs, and wearing a collar to which she held the lead.
Susan put a hand over her mouth and stuttered "Franklin?"
Crystal suddenly shouted "Franklin! Do it now!"
The Four were frozen in place, still awake but unable to move. Crystal laughed, cold and harsh, as she looked upon four new soon-to-be slaves.


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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.



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