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"I want toys!"
"Ummm, yeah. Like... um... special sexy toys that, like, make me feel super-sexy. Like special dildos an' stuff and ... I dunno...."
"Hard to think," she said.
Of course, she wasn't famous for her intelligence.
"And, um, could you, like, make some girls into my groupies?"
"I thought you already had groupies." Franklin smiled.
"Uh-huh, but I want some girls in particular. Felicia Hardy an' Betty Brant and, like, jerks like those. Want them to know, like, who's the bestest girl."
* * *
"Ms. Munroe, could I come in and talk to you?"
Storm bit her lip, almost creaming on the spot! That student was such a cute little stud, almost as cute as Franklin.
She bet he was a virgin; she bet he'd never been with a girl. He was so nervous, all that repressed pent-up delicious boy juice.
It was her job as a teacher to make certain that he learned right.
"Come in, dear, " Storm said huskily.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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