Title

Carol feels strange

by Anzaleth
Storyline Toys of the Purple Man
Characters Invisible Woman Mister Fantastic Ms. Marvel
Category Marvel Bimboization Mind Control M/F
Previous Chapter Jasmine talks to her first

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"Shouldn't you be dusting things with a French accent?" Dr. Violet asked.

"I'll dust zat smile off your -- zut alors!" Carol squealed as instead of punching Dr. Violet, her hand moved past him and started to run a feather duster - where did that come from - on the shelf behind him. "What ees going on?"

"It's simple, Marvel Maid. You are obsessed with keeping things clean, can't bear to see any dust. Why, the only thing you love more than cleaning is getting your nipples pinched and your snatch stuffed full of things."

"Zees ees crazy!"

"Don't worry, you still have your super strength. Just you can't use it to fight anymore. Just for moving objects out of the way so you clean around them."

Carol moaned as she continued to clean. She knew she had to stop - but all this cleaning was really turning her on!


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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