Riddler is waiting for Batgirl...

by venkman
Storyline Riddlers new Partner
Characters Batgirl
Category DC Mind Control
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Barbara, grimaced and grabbed her arm, bleeding from where she had left herself open to a surprise attack from a hidden goon, it was bleeding. She chastised herself as she tied up the last of the would be bank robbers. A small crowd was gathering. She smiled and turned to the face them, spotting a nearby building she fired a rope gun and swung to the ledge. She turned to face the crowd below her, hands on hips she said “I'm ….....

A dart hit her mid sentence in the back of her neck, she stumbled backwards into someone’s arms, her body completely numb. She heard a voice say something but she didn’t understand the words, not English. Before she fully lost consciousness there was a blinding white light.....

When Barbara awoke she was strapped into a metal chair, she was facing a bank of computer monitors. She was naked and saw out of the corner of her eye that the wound on her arm had healed. How long had she been out? There were electrode wires connected to different parts of her body. Two Iv’s were injected in her arm and a man in a green suit approached her, switching one of the iv bags for a new one, a green liquid.

Good. You're awake” he said. “ Need you alert for stage three” He ran his finger down her cheek. “ Not be long now”

Riddler! She blurted out “What are you doing? Let me go!.....Please!”

You'll be ready soon dear Ellie” he said placing a mask over her head, as the gas began to take effect the Riddler placed a set of earbuds in her ears. He kissed her on the forehead as she stared ahead at the screens. He walked to the door, turning before he left he produced a remote control, smiling he and activated the chair.

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solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.
colleem - 11/20/2015 7:47 AM
very good chapter solar. i would like to go further with the story but also i wanted to know what happened to the police.
C.King - 11/19/2015 10:35 PM
Solarsearcher-- Good job, but could you mention more on the police scandal on the Boards.
Solarsearcher - 11/19/2015 9:40 PM
C.King Thought you might be interested in the newest chapter of yours' and Colleem's running "Masterplan" story. http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=93496
hannibal4713 - 11/19/2015 6:41 PM
back on the old superstories site it had a ton of incredible stories that seemed to have been lost in the transition to this new site. i would love all those old stories to be brought back in
zarir_77 - 11/19/2015 5:35 AM

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