Title

Riddler is waiting for Batgirl...

by venkman
Storyline Riddlers new Partner
Characters Batgirl
Category DC Mind Control
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Barbara, grimaced and grabbed her arm, bleeding from where she had left herself open to a surprise attack from a hidden goon, it was bleeding. She chastised herself as she tied up the last of the would be bank robbers. A small crowd was gathering. She smiled and turned to the face them, spotting a nearby building she fired a rope gun and swung to the ledge. She turned to face the crowd below her, hands on hips she said “I'm ….....


A dart hit her mid sentence in the back of her neck, she stumbled backwards into someone’s arms, her body completely numb. She heard a voice say something but she didn’t understand the words, not English. Before she fully lost consciousness there was a blinding white light.....


When Barbara awoke she was strapped into a metal chair, she was facing a bank of computer monitors. She was naked and saw out of the corner of her eye that the wound on her arm had healed. How long had she been out? There were electrode wires connected to different parts of her body. Two Iv’s were injected in her arm and a man in a green suit approached her, switching one of the iv bags for a new one, a green liquid.


Good. You're awake” he said. “ Need you alert for stage three” He ran his finger down her cheek. “ Not be long now”


Riddler! She blurted out “What are you doing? Let me go!.....Please!”

You'll be ready soon dear Ellie” he said placing a mask over her head, as the gas began to take effect the Riddler placed a set of earbuds in her ears. He kissed her on the forehead as she stared ahead at the screens. He walked to the door, turning before he left he produced a remote control, smiling he and activated the chair.




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gothamalleyviper - 5/1/2016 6:57 PM
Will post a spiderkingpin later tonight or tomorrow as well as more kitty vs Kat and General America
gothamalleyviper - 5/1/2016 6:57 PM
Will post a spiderkingpin later tonight or tomorrow as well as more kitty vs Kat and General America
colleem - 5/1/2016 6:32 PM
i think a mix of Corruptor and Lascivious will be a nice Team :)
C.King - 5/1/2016 6:29 PM
Or check mind controllers on Marvel Database or Superpowers wikia.
C.King - 5/1/2016 6:28 PM
A Male and Two females.
colleem - 5/1/2016 6:28 PM
as always your a Source of Lore Information :) Thank you C.King :) I will google them and pick one :)
C.King - 5/1/2016 6:27 PM
Corruptor, secretes a pheromone or sweat which lowers inhibitions and makes them suggestible to him. Purple skin, red eyes. Lascivious and Letha, recent update has them control attraction and agression respectively.
colleem - 5/1/2016 6:24 PM
i was playing with the Charakter of Starfox. I didnt want to use Killgrave again and again. I thought on some lower Level Villain. Ringmaster or something. or a perverted Xavier
C.King - 5/1/2016 6:20 PM
Yeah, but you can bring any any comic character who has not been in the movies into the storyline. What AoS did with Absorbing Man. So what type of MC master do you need?
colleem - 5/1/2016 6:19 PM
based after the Marvel Movies, some time after Civil War.



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