Title

Riddler is waiting for Batgirl...

by venkman
Storyline Riddlers new Partner
Characters Batgirl
Category DC Mind Control
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Barbara, grimaced and grabbed her arm, bleeding from where she had left herself open to a surprise attack from a hidden goon, it was bleeding. She chastised herself as she tied up the last of the would be bank robbers. A small crowd was gathering. She smiled and turned to the face them, spotting a nearby building she fired a rope gun and swung to the ledge. She turned to face the crowd below her, hands on hips she said “I'm ….....


A dart hit her mid sentence in the back of her neck, she stumbled backwards into someone’s arms, her body completely numb. She heard a voice say something but she didn’t understand the words, not English. Before she fully lost consciousness there was a blinding white light.....


When Barbara awoke she was strapped into a metal chair, she was facing a bank of computer monitors. She was naked and saw out of the corner of her eye that the wound on her arm had healed. How long had she been out? There were electrode wires connected to different parts of her body. Two Iv’s were injected in her arm and a man in a green suit approached her, switching one of the iv bags for a new one, a green liquid.


Good. You're awake” he said. “ Need you alert for stage three” He ran his finger down her cheek. “ Not be long now”


Riddler! She blurted out “What are you doing? Let me go!.....Please!”

You'll be ready soon dear Ellie” he said placing a mask over her head, as the gas began to take effect the Riddler placed a set of earbuds in her ears. He kissed her on the forehead as she stared ahead at the screens. He walked to the door, turning before he left he produced a remote control, smiling he and activated the chair.




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Helen-Troy - 1/23/2017 12:56 PM
Replied Colleem!
colleem - 1/23/2017 11:50 AM
Helen-troy :) have a Question on the Massage Board
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 9:32 AM
As soon as I brought the Corruptor over, my laptop key board went ka-put, so Don't expect much until next week when I get a new one.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 6:33 AM
And the first chapter of the story has been brought over. Now we see where it goes on here.
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:57 AM
Helen-Troy, I understand how you feel. RL politics always brings out the most polarizing elements. Most of the writers I've had contact with here would take it as intended, but there are FAR more readers and where They might take it is where the s--- s
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:50 AM
Extreme1, people put stories from here on other sites a lot. If it's your story, there's no question you can put it where you want. If it's someone else's, I'd ask first and add a line at the top stating who wrote it & where it was from, but it's up to
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 5:06 AM
Question: would it be ok to bring a story (well the first chapter) from another site? I've got a long dead story from BE's Addventures that I'd like to see this place's take on.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:31 AM
site, the bad guys don't lose often lol. Not sure if I'll add anything, but, if it keeps going, I'll keep checking it out.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:28 AM
Helen-Troy Understandable, it read to me as satire. But, I also think this particular election hit on some really deep schisms so people are understandably raw right now (As a Mexican-American, it's been a fucking nightmare). Also, LBR, on this sit
colleem - 1/23/2017 4:17 AM
Aye. But somehow he is the Luck one who gets what he wants so he is the Hero. I see him only as possible funny side Char



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