Title

Riddler is waiting for Batgirl...

by venkman
Storyline Riddlers new Partner
Characters Batgirl
Category DC Mind Control
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Barbara, grimaced and grabbed her arm, bleeding from where she had left herself open to a surprise attack from a hidden goon, it was bleeding. She chastised herself as she tied up the last of the would be bank robbers. A small crowd was gathering. She smiled and turned to the face them, spotting a nearby building she fired a rope gun and swung to the ledge. She turned to face the crowd below her, hands on hips she said “I'm ….....


A dart hit her mid sentence in the back of her neck, she stumbled backwards into someone’s arms, her body completely numb. She heard a voice say something but she didn’t understand the words, not English. Before she fully lost consciousness there was a blinding white light.....


When Barbara awoke she was strapped into a metal chair, she was facing a bank of computer monitors. She was naked and saw out of the corner of her eye that the wound on her arm had healed. How long had she been out? There were electrode wires connected to different parts of her body. Two Iv’s were injected in her arm and a man in a green suit approached her, switching one of the iv bags for a new one, a green liquid.


Good. You're awake” he said. “ Need you alert for stage three” He ran his finger down her cheek. “ Not be long now”


Riddler! She blurted out “What are you doing? Let me go!.....Please!”

You'll be ready soon dear Ellie” he said placing a mask over her head, as the gas began to take effect the Riddler placed a set of earbuds in her ears. He kissed her on the forehead as she stared ahead at the screens. He walked to the door, turning before he left he produced a remote control, smiling he and activated the chair.




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gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.
Fanfic Fetishist - 4/18/2014 10:06 PM
I hope everyone's been enjoying my Ben 10 story so far.
Grimmer - 4/17/2014 2:53 PM
A great chapter C. King! Expect a She Hulk chapter from me today and maybe one continuing either the Circe/Catwoman/Amora option or Poison Ivy.
Gorel - 4/16/2014 9:56 PM
No worries Gothamalleyviper, late night sugar binges are good muses for writing.



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