Title

Riddler is waiting for Batgirl...

by venkman
Storyline Riddlers new Partner
Characters Batgirl
Category DC Mind Control
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Barbara, grimaced and grabbed her arm, bleeding from where she had left herself open to a surprise attack from a hidden goon, it was bleeding. She chastised herself as she tied up the last of the would be bank robbers. A small crowd was gathering. She smiled and turned to the face them, spotting a nearby building she fired a rope gun and swung to the ledge. She turned to face the crowd below her, hands on hips she said “I'm ….....


A dart hit her mid sentence in the back of her neck, she stumbled backwards into someone’s arms, her body completely numb. She heard a voice say something but she didn’t understand the words, not English. Before she fully lost consciousness there was a blinding white light.....


When Barbara awoke she was strapped into a metal chair, she was facing a bank of computer monitors. She was naked and saw out of the corner of her eye that the wound on her arm had healed. How long had she been out? There were electrode wires connected to different parts of her body. Two Iv’s were injected in her arm and a man in a green suit approached her, switching one of the iv bags for a new one, a green liquid.


Good. You're awake” he said. “ Need you alert for stage three” He ran his finger down her cheek. “ Not be long now”


Riddler! She blurted out “What are you doing? Let me go!.....Please!”

You'll be ready soon dear Ellie” he said placing a mask over her head, as the gas began to take effect the Riddler placed a set of earbuds in her ears. He kissed her on the forehead as she stared ahead at the screens. He walked to the door, turning before he left he produced a remote control, smiling he and activated the chair.




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Gorel - 7/21/2017 5:29 PM
Got some questions about a story idea on the message board if anyone is curious. Never tried a Witchblade story, thought it might be interesting.
Cal512 - 7/21/2017 8:56 AM
*risk of litigation with DA
Cal512 - 7/21/2017 8:55 AM
My problem was litigation by DeviantArt and now I'm lacking motivation.
JimmyKasche - 7/21/2017 2:39 AM
I've been a bit busy in real life... which is why my chapters kinda stalled... when I finally got time to write... I got sick and my brain doesn't wanna focus :P
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:56 PM
Actually let me know if there's another story you want me to add or continue... Got so many ;)
Gorel - 7/20/2017 10:54 PM
Well I'll try to post She-Hulk; Going Native some time this weekend. Unless anyone else would like to.
colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
Gorel - 7/20/2017 1:10 PM
A combination of the 3 really.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:47 AM
Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
Danknoodle420 - 7/20/2017 10:44 AM
Yeah sure! I don't write that much but I'll keep it in mind. Also excuse my laziness haha. Ha... I need to stop being so lazy. It's really turning into a problem now.



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