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"That she does," Spider-Femme commented. "So why is it so important that she not domme, anyways? Is it because she's so neurotic?"
"We wouldn't say she's neurotic...," Venom started, but Black Cat interrupted.
"Oh, really? She's one of the top 25 most popular Super-Hookers, yet she seems convinced that because she isn't number one, she's nothing."
Mary-Jane conceded. "Okay, we concede the point. And the two have their origin in the same event. You probably don't remember this, but years a go, she lost her powers. She got them back of course, stronger than ever, but for months she wasn't a Super-Hooker
Gwen and Felicia both blanched at that. "Wow," Gwen said. "That must've been horrible for her!"
"It was," MJ responded. "And she carries the scars to this day. Like, she used to love anal; nothing pleased her more than to have a nice, big cock rammed up her ass. So, that was the last sex act she'd performed on the day she lost her powers and now just
fingering her backdoor makes her freak out."
Felicia and Gwen made sympathetic noises, as MJ went on. "Anyways, ever since then, she's been all about taking charge and being in command. And that's great for superheroine-ing, but it isn't healthy to be like that all the time. We've got to make her sub,
and like it, for her own good!"
Or add your own
XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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