Title

He turns on his mother

by lessonunlearned
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters Invisible Woman
Category
Previous Chapter Sue discovers them

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"NO."

"Excuse me?!"

"I don't want to change her back, I don't want you and dad to take my powers away, i'm stronger than you, I can change anything I want."

"Franklin..." Sue was worried now "You have to calm down."

"No mom, I'm going to make you calm down!" The boy sat up in bed, and his eyes began to glow, with a push into The Invisible Woman's mind he began to make the necessary changes. "It's going to be fine, mom, you're going to love me for what I can do."

Sue's head was a whirlwind of changing throughts, her son was a good boy, his ideas would change the world for the better. Of course he should keep his powers... Crystal seemed so happy, after all. It couldn't be bad.

She was his mother after all, she should protect him, she would only want what's best for the boy...  Sue's eyes dilated as the change in her mind took hold. Yeah, this was good. She looked at Crystal again who was still joyfully sucking down Franklin's spunk, she wanted to feel like that. She wanted to make her boy happy...

As Franklin released her she gasped, taking a new breath as a different woman. Crystal didn't horrify her now. If anything, Sue only felt jealousy. "I see now." she said quietly.


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gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 6:50 PM
Was somebody going to pick up from Asp's new chapter? I was about to start when I noticed a new option. If someone wants to take it go ahead I will wait till tomorrow.
aspiringactor - 4/22/2014 4:12 PM
Just added a chapter for 'Return of the Black Queen' if any one wants to take a look.
Gorel - 4/22/2014 11:36 AM
No worries
gothamalleyviper - 4/22/2014 5:08 AM
Gorel, I will have something up for the Blue Flu this evening, just had stuff to do the last few days.
venkman - 4/21/2014 1:14 AM
Thanks guys!Glad you liked it. Not sure where to take it now but would be good to see it continue, either by me or someone else :)
ESchorcho - 4/20/2014 9:49 PM
I second that on Fausta's revenge. Really good stuff. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Loving the Valkyrie transformation.
dunloprobert - 4/20/2014 9:23 AM
venkman, just to say i have thoroughly enjoyed your fausta's revenge story, and i am glad no one else has tried to add/interfere with it. thankyou.
Fanfic Fetishist - 4/18/2014 10:06 PM
I hope everyone's been enjoying my Ben 10 story so far.
Grimmer - 4/17/2014 2:53 PM
A great chapter C. King! Expect a She Hulk chapter from me today and maybe one continuing either the Circe/Catwoman/Amora option or Poison Ivy.
Gorel - 4/16/2014 9:56 PM
No worries Gothamalleyviper, late night sugar binges are good muses for writing.



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