Title

He turns on his mother

by lessonunlearned
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters Invisible Woman
Category
Previous Chapter Sue discovers them

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"NO."

"Excuse me?!"

"I don't want to change her back, I don't want you and dad to take my powers away, i'm stronger than you, I can change anything I want."

"Franklin..." Sue was worried now "You have to calm down."

"No mom, I'm going to make you calm down!" The boy sat up in bed, and his eyes began to glow, with a push into The Invisible Woman's mind he began to make the necessary changes. "It's going to be fine, mom, you're going to love me for what I can do."

Sue's head was a whirlwind of changing throughts, her son was a good boy, his ideas would change the world for the better. Of course he should keep his powers... Crystal seemed so happy, after all. It couldn't be bad.

She was his mother after all, she should protect him, she would only want what's best for the boy...  Sue's eyes dilated as the change in her mind took hold. Yeah, this was good. She looked at Crystal again who was still joyfully sucking down Franklin's spunk, she wanted to feel like that. She wanted to make her boy happy...

As Franklin released her she gasped, taking a new breath as a different woman. Crystal didn't horrify her now. If anything, Sue only felt jealousy. "I see now." she said quietly.


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January - 12/20/2014 2:59 AM
I love this Medieval Madness line. Might think of trying to add on to it, but I've never posted an episode on this site...
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 10:05 PM
ES, look for a doctor in the fish
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 10:00 PM
GAV, I loved the chapter. I did like the Diana/Lois interaction. Still can't believe I did that. What is going to happen in the ceremony? Want to continue this in the message board?
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:34 PM
I am wondering if the same people are posting twisted Disney Princess stories here http://www.pinterest.com/pin/552746554236351206/
gothamalleyviper - 12/18/2014 9:31 PM
@ ES, I did incorporate it, I hope you like where I took the rest of the cast throw the morning.
ESchorcho - 12/18/2014 9:16 PM
gothamalleyviper, I messed up on my Lois Human Sacrifice chapter in Rubber Queen. It should have come after your Human Sacrifice chapter. Can't believe I did that.
colleem - 12/18/2014 11:25 AM
Susan´s dream is online. I will try to write Tony´s dream until Saturday. If someone want to write with CC and me in this Story just tell it :) We are talking about Email for better planing
gothamalleyviper - 12/17/2014 8:42 PM
I am about half way throw the chapter for Rubberqueen, and plotted out the "Wedding Chapter", but I keep getting interupted by my life AFK. I kind of want the Warhamer can from 63 Joker and go play "Whack-a-Joe"
colleem - 12/17/2014 2:14 PM
Oprimus... dont you think that it is a bit... unfair to post empty chapters?
ESchorcho - 12/17/2014 7:34 AM
gothamalleyviper, do you need any help with Rubber Queen? Let me know. If you want to start a discussion in the Message Board I would be willing to talk.



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