Title

He turns on his mother

by lessonunlearned
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters Invisible Woman
Category
Previous Chapter Sue discovers them

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"NO."

"Excuse me?!"

"I don't want to change her back, I don't want you and dad to take my powers away, i'm stronger than you, I can change anything I want."

"Franklin..." Sue was worried now "You have to calm down."

"No mom, I'm going to make you calm down!" The boy sat up in bed, and his eyes began to glow, with a push into The Invisible Woman's mind he began to make the necessary changes. "It's going to be fine, mom, you're going to love me for what I can do."

Sue's head was a whirlwind of changing throughts, her son was a good boy, his ideas would change the world for the better. Of course he should keep his powers... Crystal seemed so happy, after all. It couldn't be bad.

She was his mother after all, she should protect him, she would only want what's best for the boy...  Sue's eyes dilated as the change in her mind took hold. Yeah, this was good. She looked at Crystal again who was still joyfully sucking down Franklin's spunk, she wanted to feel like that. She wanted to make her boy happy...

As Franklin released her she gasped, taking a new breath as a different woman. Crystal didn't horrify her now. If anything, Sue only felt jealousy. "I see now." she said quietly.


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