He turns on his mother

by lessonunlearned
Storyline The Manipulator
Characters Invisible Woman
Previous Chapter Sue discovers them

Community Raiting:

Your Raiting: You must login to rate the chapter


"Excuse me?!"

"I don't want to change her back, I don't want you and dad to take my powers away, i'm stronger than you, I can change anything I want."

"Franklin..." Sue was worried now "You have to calm down."

"No mom, I'm going to make you calm down!" The boy sat up in bed, and his eyes began to glow, with a push into The Invisible Woman's mind he began to make the necessary changes. "It's going to be fine, mom, you're going to love me for what I can do."

Sue's head was a whirlwind of changing throughts, her son was a good boy, his ideas would change the world for the better. Of course he should keep his powers... Crystal seemed so happy, after all. It couldn't be bad.

She was his mother after all, she should protect him, she would only want what's best for the boy...  Sue's eyes dilated as the change in her mind took hold. Yeah, this was good. She looked at Crystal again who was still joyfully sucking down Franklin's spunk, she wanted to feel like that. She wanted to make her boy happy...

As Franklin released her she gasped, taking a new breath as a different woman. Crystal didn't horrify her now. If anything, Sue only felt jealousy. "I see now." she said quietly.

Next Chapters

Or add your own

SuperStories Wall

ESchorcho - 11/30/2015 6:57 PM
gothamalleyviper, I'm working on a new Rubber Queen chapter. Look for it in the next few days.
gothamalleyviper - 11/30/2015 10:25 AM
CC, the fix I found was to go back in Internet Explorer and re-do the breaks.
CorruptionCentral - 11/30/2015 8:57 AM
Had the same issue GAV noted posting in Chrome. Tried MS Edge too with same result. Finally copied text into Work and changed font to Times New Roman. That worked, kinda
gothamalleyviper - 11/29/2015 3:10 PM
Using Firefox to upload chapters is deleting line breaks
Cal512 - 11/28/2015 12:55 PM
It's really hard to find certain stories among the adventures. The Categories and Characters make it somewhat easier, but maybe something more can be done about that?
solddate - 11/24/2015 2:50 AM
It happens to the best of us Burke, don't worry about it.
burke_rakers - 11/23/2015 3:17 AM
Well, I did my best to remove my busted starts. I know it's far from perfect :>(
burke_rakers - 11/22/2015 12:55 PM
Could someone remove a couple of those starts? It didn't seem like it was working, so I kept trying...
colleem - 11/21/2015 5:46 AM
okay :) Then i will wait with my Chapter until you have yours online :) like the Idea to bring back the Masterplan story
Solarsearcher - 11/20/2015 10:58 AM
Don't worry. The police scandal will be addressed in the next chapter.

You must be a member to post to the wall