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Sue discovers them

by lessonunlearned
Storyline The Manipulator
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Previous Chapter Franklin and Crystal continue to fuck

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"WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING TO MY SON?!" The pair were shocked out of their post orgasmic glow by the shriek of Susan Richards, The Invisible Woman, standing in the door, looking very very angry.


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The Fantastic Four had arrived back early from their offworld trip, having dealt with the latest invasion attempt and repaired an at risk space station. Now they were heading home, The team were eager to get back to normal life.

Ben and Johnny had been bickering the whole way home and Johnny had left immediately for a date, whereas Ben was looking forward to a few beers at a local bar. Of course Reed was quick to shoot off to his lab, leaving his wife alone to go and check on their son to let him know the family was home and safe.

Sue was looking forward to seeing her boy again, it had been almost a week after all. While she trusted Crystal to look after him while she was gone, she couldn't quite squash the motherly concern for his wellbeing.

as she neared Franklin's room her concerns flared back up at the unusual sounds drifting through the air. The sound proofing in the Baxter Building's rooms was good, but there were definitely some loud noises coming from the direction of Franklin's room.

She began to run down the hall, worry overtaking her. The noises were clearer now...

"It almost sounds like... No, couldn't be." Sue knew enough to recognise the nature of those shouts. That wasn't fear or pain... "Oh god, tell me Franklin hasn't got into Johnny's dirty movie collection..." Sue said to herself quietly.

She steeled herself to go through the door, ready for an awkward conversation with her son.

She pressed the access panel, and the door slid open, revealing something she definitely hadn't been expecting. On Franklin's bed, her friend Crystal, sweating, dishevelled, in some grotesque pornogrpahic parody of her costume, bucked against her son, as he came inside her.

Sue's jaw dropped. She had trouble finding words for a moment, her eyes just fixed on the unlikely couple before her. Just as they finished, she seemed to regain the use of her vocal chords, "WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING TO MY SON?!" she shrieked.

The pair jumped out of their skins, Franklin looked scared, but Crystal had a sublime look of satisfaction on her face as she turned to face Sue. "Hi Sue, Me and Franklin have just been playing together, he's super good already! You'll be so proud!"

Sue was beyond disbelief, what was Crystal saying? For that matter, what was she Wearing?! and those proportions... This wasn't normal. She extended a forcefield and pulled the newly ditzy Inhuman off her son. With a shlick, his dick slipped out of Crystal's gooey cunt. Crystal let out a squeal, hands moving to her pussy in an effort to hold in Franklin's copious load.

Franklin lay paralysed in the bed, watching as his mother turned a disgusted eye from his fucktoy to him. 

"Is this what you're doing now, Franklin? Your powers came back didn't they. And you do... you do THIS?!" She waved an arm as Crystal who was rubbing herself now, fingers covered in spunk.

"I... I wasn't going to leave her like that, mom! I was going to put her back to how she was afterwards!"

"It doesn't matter, Franklin! this is disgusting! you're going to stop right this instant, and we're going to go and get your father to put an end to this. If you can't be trusted with these ablities, then you shouldn't have them!"

"But mom, I don't want to lose them!"

"you should have thought of that before you used them to rape your aunt!" Crystal was slurping cum form her gloved fingers, as more dripped from her pussy onto the floor.

"mmm, it wasn't rape" moaned Crystal "I wanted to feel Franklin's cock in my girly hole, he's a good boy, Sue"

"This is grotesque. Change her back, Franklin. Right now."


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colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.
gothamalleyviper - 9/14/2014 9:09 PM
Anyone want to toss me some help with a book length project over on message board?



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