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Sue discovers them

by lessonunlearned
Storyline The Manipulator
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Previous Chapter Franklin and Crystal continue to fuck

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"WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING TO MY SON?!" The pair were shocked out of their post orgasmic glow by the shriek of Susan Richards, The Invisible Woman, standing in the door, looking very very angry.


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The Fantastic Four had arrived back early from their offworld trip, having dealt with the latest invasion attempt and repaired an at risk space station. Now they were heading home, The team were eager to get back to normal life.

Ben and Johnny had been bickering the whole way home and Johnny had left immediately for a date, whereas Ben was looking forward to a few beers at a local bar. Of course Reed was quick to shoot off to his lab, leaving his wife alone to go and check on their son to let him know the family was home and safe.

Sue was looking forward to seeing her boy again, it had been almost a week after all. While she trusted Crystal to look after him while she was gone, she couldn't quite squash the motherly concern for his wellbeing.

as she neared Franklin's room her concerns flared back up at the unusual sounds drifting through the air. The sound proofing in the Baxter Building's rooms was good, but there were definitely some loud noises coming from the direction of Franklin's room.

She began to run down the hall, worry overtaking her. The noises were clearer now...

"It almost sounds like... No, couldn't be." Sue knew enough to recognise the nature of those shouts. That wasn't fear or pain... "Oh god, tell me Franklin hasn't got into Johnny's dirty movie collection..." Sue said to herself quietly.

She steeled herself to go through the door, ready for an awkward conversation with her son.

She pressed the access panel, and the door slid open, revealing something she definitely hadn't been expecting. On Franklin's bed, her friend Crystal, sweating, dishevelled, in some grotesque pornogrpahic parody of her costume, bucked against her son, as he came inside her.

Sue's jaw dropped. She had trouble finding words for a moment, her eyes just fixed on the unlikely couple before her. Just as they finished, she seemed to regain the use of her vocal chords, "WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING TO MY SON?!" she shrieked.

The pair jumped out of their skins, Franklin looked scared, but Crystal had a sublime look of satisfaction on her face as she turned to face Sue. "Hi Sue, Me and Franklin have just been playing together, he's super good already! You'll be so proud!"

Sue was beyond disbelief, what was Crystal saying? For that matter, what was she Wearing?! and those proportions... This wasn't normal. She extended a forcefield and pulled the newly ditzy Inhuman off her son. With a shlick, his dick slipped out of Crystal's gooey cunt. Crystal let out a squeal, hands moving to her pussy in an effort to hold in Franklin's copious load.

Franklin lay paralysed in the bed, watching as his mother turned a disgusted eye from his fucktoy to him. 

"Is this what you're doing now, Franklin? Your powers came back didn't they. And you do... you do THIS?!" She waved an arm as Crystal who was rubbing herself now, fingers covered in spunk.

"I... I wasn't going to leave her like that, mom! I was going to put her back to how she was afterwards!"

"It doesn't matter, Franklin! this is disgusting! you're going to stop right this instant, and we're going to go and get your father to put an end to this. If you can't be trusted with these ablities, then you shouldn't have them!"

"But mom, I don't want to lose them!"

"you should have thought of that before you used them to rape your aunt!" Crystal was slurping cum form her gloved fingers, as more dripped from her pussy onto the floor.

"mmm, it wasn't rape" moaned Crystal "I wanted to feel Franklin's cock in my girly hole, he's a good boy, Sue"

"This is grotesque. Change her back, Franklin. Right now."


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
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colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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