Title

Scarlet Claw and Stinger find some people to toy with

by supersizeme198
Storyline The Body-Melding Ray
Characters
Category Gender Switch Transformation
Previous Chapter Spidey finds a tip that Lady Octopus has been on the move lately, and goes hunting

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The Bar With No Name the number one spot in New York for any super-villain to have a few beers, and not worry about any self ricious heroes busting in and spoiling their fun. Since Stinger looked enough like her old self, Scorpia, no one paid attention to her as her goggles took pictures at her fellow patrons.

"What about Hypno-Hustler?" Stinger said into the microphone built into her costume.

"When I said go to the bar and find potentail recruits but to get lesser know villains to avoid getting attention, not to pick a bunch of one trick ponies" Scarlet Claw said. While she used the hideouts computer to transfer the money out of the acconts of her past selfs to buy new equipment.

"Sorry boss-babe I'll try harder" Stinger said as she look over at the pool table. "Hey what about the Ringer, Slyde, Barrier and Man-killer?"

Carol had to admit they were decent picks, Ringers hard air constuct tech would be useful if they made blades or shields, Slydes suit was completly frictionless to the point that not even Spidey's webs could hold him, and Man-killer and Barrier both had super strenght and durability. But best of all they were all so low on the food chain no one would notice they were gone.

"Good job I'll put them on the good raw material list, keep up the good work" "Sure thing boss-babe" Stinger replied.

Carol continued to type away at the computer. As she finished cleaning out Mary Jane Watson's account she moved on to deleteing her Facebook account and found the old pictures of her and Peter. She couldn't help but sign at the old memories of her past life.

"Focus Carol you can spend all the time you want with Peter, after you know how the ray works" she though to herself. "Right now the only thing you should worry about is having six or seven members of the crew."


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colleem - 7/20/2017 1:30 PM
for me it is the bored thing. Most of the Stories are only a few sentence long and not very deep in charakter.
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A combination of the 3 really.
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Also have you seen any other members around? Seems like they kinda dissapear for some reason. I don't know if they're off to work, got bored of writing, or I'm just completely wrong and you guys are working your butts off.
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Cal512 - 7/19/2017 3:27 PM
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The site when down when I was adding tags for the newest Corruptor chapter last night, but I got it posted today...maybe I should have taken the hint, lol.
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Evva, I can read it fine.
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Guys, can you read my chapter clearly? http://www.superstories.net/addventure/Chapter.aspx?ID=334884



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