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Reed quickly ran through the locations of the Fantastic Four; Sue was dancing at Heavenly Bodies, Medusa was visiting with her sister, Firebird was doing some
pro bono hooking out in the city...but She-Hulk should still be in the building.
He quickly commed her office. At that moment, Jen and Rick were making out passionately, so Jen was rather annoyed when Reed's call came in.
"Yeah, Reed," she said, somewhat breathless. "What is it?"
"We have appear to have an interdimensional incursion in the building."
She-Hulk cursed. "Who and were?"
"I don't know, and pinning it down. There's no trace of a rift or portal, but there's definitely an extradimensional entity present in the building."
Rick spoke up. "Uh, yeah. That'd be me."
She-Hulk stared at him. "WHAT?"
Twenty minutes later, Reed had Rick inside some machine or other, and was observing the results.
"Absolutely fascinating. The body is of our Rick, but the consciousness is not; it appears to be a duplicate of that an alternate Rick.
"You mean...I'm possessing your Rick? Is he okay," Rick said, concerned for his counterpart.
"No need to worry. He's there too, just quiescent. He appears to be asleep and having a rather pleasant dream. He should awake as soon as I remove you."
Rick closed his eyes; this was a lot to take in, and he didn't really care for the implications of this, but it wasn't right for him to steal another guy's body.
"So, how soon can we go about doing that?" he asked.
"Hang on," She-Hulk interjected. "What happens to this Rick? He seems like a great guy, we can't just discard him."
Reed chuckled. "Not to worry. It should be relatively easy to create an 'empty' duplicate body of Rick for him to inhabit, and to transfer him in there. There is some bad news, however; being a duplicate, Rick, you were not entirely stable, and I believe that
being sent to another universe damaged you; hence your inability to recall how you came to be here. You're fine now, and should remain so, but I do not believe you would survive a return trip."
Rick was aghast. "You mean I'm stuck here?"
Reed nodded. Rick's face fell...until Jen embraced and kissed him.
"Don't you worry, Rick" she said. "I'll make sure you're taken care of and comfortable."
Rick smiled and kissed her back. "Thanks, Jen."
"Hey, what're friends for? Besides if there are two of you, it means you can fuck me more often!"
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extreme1 - 1/23/2017 9:32 AM
As soon as I brought the Corruptor over, my laptop key board went ka-put, so Don't expect much until next week when I get a new one.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 6:33 AM
And the first chapter of the story has been brought over.
Now we see where it goes on here.
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:57 AM
Helen-Troy, I understand how you feel. RL politics always brings out the most polarizing elements. Most of the writers I've had contact with here would take it as intended, but there are FAR more readers and where They might take it is where the s--- s
CorruptionCentral - 1/23/2017 5:50 AM
Extreme1, people put stories from here on other sites a lot. If it's your story, there's no question you can put it where you want. If it's someone else's, I'd ask first and add a line at the top stating who wrote it & where it was from, but it's up to
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 5:06 AM
Question: would it be ok to bring a story (well the first chapter) from another site?
I've got a long dead story from BE's Addventures that I'd like to see this place's take on.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:31 AM
site, the bad guys don't lose often lol.
Not sure if I'll add anything, but, if it keeps going, I'll keep checking it out.
extreme1 - 1/23/2017 4:28 AM
Understandable, it read to me as satire.
But, I also think this particular election hit on some really deep schisms
so people are understandably raw right now (As a Mexican-American, it's been a fucking nightmare).
Also, LBR, on this sit
colleem - 1/23/2017 4:17 AM
Aye. But somehow he is the Luck one who gets what he wants so he is the Hero. I see him only as possible funny side Char
Helen-Troy - 1/23/2017 4:05 AM
Guys I'm a little surprised by reaction to this. It's satire, with the possibility to go two ways (let's face it, I hardly made him a "hero") and as for politics, this place is hardly PC at all!
colleem - 1/23/2017 1:58 AM
Aye. Besides the fact that it was trump it was a very good chapter.
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