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Reed quickly ran through the locations of the Fantastic Four; Sue was dancing at Heavenly Bodies, Medusa was visiting with her sister, Firebird was doing some
pro bono hooking out in the city...but She-Hulk should still be in the building.
He quickly commed her office. At that moment, Jen and Rick were making out passionately, so Jen was rather annoyed when Reed's call came in.
"Yeah, Reed," she said, somewhat breathless. "What is it?"
"We have appear to have an interdimensional incursion in the building."
She-Hulk cursed. "Who and were?"
"I don't know, and pinning it down. There's no trace of a rift or portal, but there's definitely an extradimensional entity present in the building."
Rick spoke up. "Uh, yeah. That'd be me."
She-Hulk stared at him. "WHAT?"
Twenty minutes later, Reed had Rick inside some machine or other, and was observing the results.
"Absolutely fascinating. The body is of our Rick, but the consciousness is not; it appears to be a duplicate of that an alternate Rick.
"You mean...I'm possessing your Rick? Is he okay," Rick said, concerned for his counterpart.
"No need to worry. He's there too, just quiescent. He appears to be asleep and having a rather pleasant dream. He should awake as soon as I remove you."
Rick closed his eyes; this was a lot to take in, and he didn't really care for the implications of this, but it wasn't right for him to steal another guy's body.
"So, how soon can we go about doing that?" he asked.
"Hang on," She-Hulk interjected. "What happens to this Rick? He seems like a great guy, we can't just discard him."
Reed chuckled. "Not to worry. It should be relatively easy to create an 'empty' duplicate body of Rick for him to inhabit, and to transfer him in there. There is some bad news, however; being a duplicate, Rick, you were not entirely stable, and I believe that
being sent to another universe damaged you; hence your inability to recall how you came to be here. You're fine now, and should remain so, but I do not believe you would survive a return trip."
Rick was aghast. "You mean I'm stuck here?"
Reed nodded. Rick's face fell...until Jen embraced and kissed him.
"Don't you worry, Rick" she said. "I'll make sure you're taken care of and comfortable."
Rick smiled and kissed her back. "Thanks, Jen."
"Hey, what're friends for? Besides if there are two of you, it means you can fuck me more often!"
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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