Title

She "meets" Lois shopping

by Shendude
Storyline Jade Dragon (version 2)
Characters Jade Dragon
Category DC F/F Mind Control
Previous Chapter Lois Lane

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Lois would be a rather different kettle of fish than Kara; on the one hand, she lacked superpowers, and thus would be more vulnerable to Jade Dragon's influence. On the other hand, unlike naive, impressionable Supergirl, Lois had a strong will and well-honed reporter's instincts; it would be harder to keep her lulled as Jade Dragon enthralled her.

Truth be told, Jade Dragon was kinda playing by ear here; in her own universe, she'd already enslaved all of Earth's major heroes by the time she got to Lois, and had used her husband against her. It would be quite exciting seeing how long it would take Lois to break without that leverage.

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Lois Lane exited the supermarket, pushing a cart full of groceries. Sure, Clark could've procured most of what they needed fresher and for free, but A: that risked causing suspicion, and B: Lois was too independent for that. This did not, however, make the task any less mind-numbingly boring; as a result of which, it wans't until she'd dragged her cart up to her car that she noticed the half-naked Asian beauty lounging on top of it, holding an elegant cigarette holder and breathing out glowing green smoke.

The woman looked...no, leered at her, undressing Lois with her eyes. "Hello, Ms Lane," she purred in a sultry voice. "You don't know me, but I'd very much like to...'know' you."

Her tone suggested that she meant "know" in the biblical sense. The various individual elements of the whole scenario weren't unusual to Lois; she was an attractive woman, so come ones were common, she was famous so random strangers introducing themselves was old hat, and she'd been dealing with superheroes since long before she'd married one. Still, all these elements combined was definitely weird, even for Lois.


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exidor455 - 8/1/2014 7:17 AM
Xuxa works fine for me because I'd never heard of that other one.
CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xuxa_1 Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM

colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.



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