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The X-Mansion was now a training facility for the Hellfire Club. Some were being trained as heirs to the Inner Circle, some as soldiers, some as whores and strippers....
Rogue was a "black rook," one of the Hellfire Club's top legbreakers. It was fun. Nothing Rogue liked better than fucking shit up... unless it was just fucking shit....
Her communicator buzzed. Looked like the White Queen wanted to see her in her office.
Rogue flexed her thick muscles and lumbered off. Might as well see what her royal highness wanted.
* * *
Siouxsie's phone rang.
"Hello?" she said after pulling the cum-coated cell from her snatch. "Oh, Ms. Kitten! How NICE to hear you, DARLING! Oh, a party? Of course, I can provide you!"
The White Lady licked her lips. The Kitten, that obese, decadent crime princess, was one of her best customers. Kitten's parties were so wild, they put Caligula to shame. Yes, the only person who bought more shit from her was that lovely Emma Frost and her
"So, what special guests will you be inviting, Kitty, dear?" Siouxsie asked, hoping that she would be a guest as well as a provider.
* * *
Emma Frost tapped her desk with her long lacquered nails and took a puff of her cigarette. Once again, that daughter of her was causing problems.
Emma loved the girl, but sometimes she could be... oh, so frustrating!
"Fuck, I need some snow," she growled and reached for the phone.
"What is it now?" Emma yelled.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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