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She decides to seduce him, but Spider-Man comes in, crashing through the window.
"Okay Wasp, I'm taking you down."
"It's Hornet Queen now. How did you know I was here?"
"Well, my spider sense alerted me of something going on here. And since it's Pym's lab I knew it had to be you because of your history with him." Spider-Man says. "Also give back MJ!"
"How do you know IF I or my slaves took her?" Janet said.
"I saw them do it." he replied
"WHAT!?!? THOSE IDIOTS!" she said angrily. "Anyway, your to late anyway. Mary Jane is part of my hive now, you could say she's a whole new person now." she chuckled.
Janet then uses to telepathic link to tell Enchantress to teleport her back to the base, and also to teleport Hank, so she can seduce him there.
Knowing the trap might not work now she then has Enchantress along with She-Venom and Carnage Cat teleport to the lab and attack, Spider-Man.
- She seduces Hank, then punishes Maria, Elektra, Black Widow, and X-23. (Open)
- She punishes Maria, Elektra, Black Widow, and X-23, before seducing Hank. (Open)
- She-Venom, Carnage Cat, and Enchantress attack Spider-Man. (Open)
- She chooses to sting Spider-Woman now. (Open)
- She seduces Hank
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CJ - 7/29/2014 1:24 PM
I just looked up variants of Susan, I actually wanted to use Zsuzsa, but figured Xuxa would be easier to remem
Evva - 7/29/2014 1:15 PM
CJ, are you really using Xuxa?
Well, she was big at latin america and iberic countries, it is like call someone as Dolly Parton or Sade
solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
colleem - 7/27/2014 10:09 AM
colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
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