Title

She takes down Susan Storm.

by Regigigas Rules
Storyline Hive of the Wasp
Characters Wasp Sif Psylocke Valkyrie Invisible Woman
Category Corruption Mind Control
Previous Chapter Thordis goes after Sif.

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Susan Storm was alone at the Baxter Building, while the others were having a 'Dude Day'. She can can't belive her brother actually got Reed to actually agree to it. But she was enjoying the alone time relaxing.

"Hello, Sue." Said a voice. Just then something came out of a shadow in the room. It was Psylocke. As well as She-Hulk, Elektra, and Black Widow.

Susan remembered hearing about Janet's defection to evil, and who had been corrupted so far. She knew knew they were here for her. She turned invisible and ran off.

"She's in the hallway." Psylocke spoke telepathicly to the leader of another set of her fellow Hive sisters.

Sue ran as fast as she could to get to the control room and send a distress signal to the others. She stopped being invisble when she was far from the room the members of Janet's hive had appeared.

"Susan!" a voice said, as Sue got scared for a second.

"Don't worry it's me." Sif said, with Valkyrie by her side.

"Oh. Thank goodness, it's you. I thought you were one of Janet's slaves. Anyway, good to see you again Lady Sif, and you too Valkyrie." Sue said.

"Were friends, you can just call me Sif. Now we have to get to the control room right? That's where thou can contact the rest of thou team." Sif said.

"Yeah."

"I shall help thou get there." Sif said.

"As shall I." Valkyrie said.

"Thank you." Sue started to walk forward.

"Psylocke, she fell for it. Thanks again for the telepathic link between the hive." Sif said in her mind.

"Glad to hear, her highness liked my idea. Anyway I will alert the queen."

They arrived after a few minuites and as soon as Sue opened the door something painful hit her face, blinding her for a few seconds. When she could clearly see again she saw infront of her, already in the control room, was Hornet Queen.

"NO!" Sue screamed, realizing what that pain must have been.

Janet, already in her small form, flew closer to to Sue, so Sue could hear her wings buzz. "Fury is only aware of my slaves at the time of Maria defection to my side. So you did not realize Valkery and Sif are mine. Aint that right.

Both Sif and Valkyrie kneed down on one knee. "

A look of pure terror came over Sue's face as she realized she had walked right into this trap so easily, and also realized could not hold on to her mind much longer.

"Oh don't worry Sue. I won't KILL you, but you are going to be a great member of my hive. See, it is a LIE what others say about you being so great. The truth is you are not superior to me. Now, arn't I right. I am the one superior to you.

"I.....I...I....Y..Ye...Yes.....My queen." Sue said, and surrendered.


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colleem - 9/27/2014 1:06 PM
Depends on the Villain i would say :) but i think the best results would be a combination of many different Methods.
C.King - 9/27/2014 12:43 PM
Question: What mind control device and techniques would be best to make a super a willing pornstar? Or should I make one up?
Drake G. Reaper - 9/27/2014 10:41 AM
Well I've updated the Bimbotech storyline with a possible plot twist that could develop. :)
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 12:09 PM
Well let me know if you have any ideas for this storyline beyond Diana discovering that absolutely every hero, villain, male and female alike, are as fat and slothful as she and Bruce are.
burke_rakers - 9/26/2014 11:34 AM
Thanks, Grimmer. Man oh man, this has been a rough few months. Every time I THINK I've got everything under control, someone I was counting on goes off the rails or some system breaks down. I got home last night, looked at my computer, and said "I'v
ESchorcho - 9/26/2014 10:35 AM
gothamalleyviper, glad you like the new chapters. I will not have time to add anything to Rubber Queen before the weekend so I look forward to your next chapter.
Grimmer - 9/26/2014 10:14 AM
Burke, thanks for updating one of my options for Random Romance. Expect a continuing chapter from me in the future. And don't worry, I won't rush to enact another change, as I know that's an issue you've had with my work in the past on Forever Changing
gothamalleyviper - 9/25/2014 6:39 PM
ESChorcho, I like it, I am going to post something this weekend for Rubber Queen, of you want to take the Royal Court to Dawn or Helena and Dinah to Dawn that would be help me and be interesting.
Sailor Mercury - 9/23/2014 7:45 PM
I am back. Going to try and reboot an old story I started a few years back.
gothamalleyviper - 9/14/2014 9:09 PM
Anyone want to toss me some help with a book length project over on message board?



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