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Elsewhere...

by DeMonic
Storyline Weird New World “Heros”!?
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Previous Chapter Cap becomes...of no...this isn't possible...

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Sue groaned; her brain felt stretched and dry, the inside of her eyelids like sandpaper.

“What the F*UK was I drinking last night” she rumbled in a husky, coarse sounding voice. Gingerly she pulled herself vertical and looked around through bleary eyes...only to realise she had no clue where she was.

She’d been laying on a battered steel work bench, pushed up against the wall of what looked like the cellar of a large tenement building; the room was grimy and cold, filled with work surfaces like the one she was sitting on, which in turn where covered by an haphazard mix of equipment, some of it straight out of a Meth Lab, the rest looking like it had been looted out of Doctor Frankenstein’s.

Sue moved to rub her face, but froze, her hand hovering in front of her face...or was it her hand? The callused paw in front of her LOOKED like her hand and responded to her...but something was wrong.

Lurching to her feet she staggered over to the metal fronted freezer, which sat across the way, using it’s pitted front as an impromptu mirror.

Looking back at her was a woman with a harsh, almost masculine face framed by a mane of red hair; her bare arms where corded with thick muscle as where her legs, a fact that was clearly visible thanks to her skin tight leather trousers, while her meaty tits strained against the red laces of her open fronted, yellow leather jerkin, it’s shade matching that of her pants.

On reach arm she wore metallic wristbands, with razor sharp blades mounted on top and a small housing on the bottom...and as her eyes settled on these everything snapped into place.

She HAD been Sue Richards, The Invisible Woman...NOW she was Sue PHELPS, Hellrazor...


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gothamalleyviper - 11/26/2016 10:08 AM
For world's end Harem, who should be the first to get pregnant?
exidor455 - 11/26/2016 5:45 AM
CorruptionCentral - No problem. Sorry for being snippy! :)
extreme1 - 11/26/2016 12:10 AM
gothamalleyviper, thanks (well really thanks to colleem who suggested that I not reveal every buyer at once). There's a thread on the message board if anyone wants to talk about any ideas or has any feedback.
gothamalleyviper - 11/25/2016 10:53 PM
Interesting start on X-Men Extreme1
CorruptionCentral - 11/25/2016 3:40 PM
Exidor: Didn't think you were having ago. Thought you were feeling unappreciated on CHYOA & thought I would say I'll be adding there but it will take a while.
extreme1 - 11/24/2016 12:57 PM
I gotta agree with exidor, but then again I'm biased because I have two stories and neither have had anything submitted for them. Whereas Gambit the Pimp has had multiple people work on it (something I'm very thankful for).
exidor455 - 11/24/2016 11:56 AM
Not having ago at you CorruptionCentral. I just get the impression that people at CHYOA read stories that the authors put multiple branches into, unlike here where it's more collaborative. I refer to bounce stories back and forth.
gothamalleyviper - 11/24/2016 11:56 AM
I know this doesn't apply to anyone outside of the US, but Happy Thanksgiving. (I only you Canadians had yours in October)
CorruptionCentral - 11/24/2016 9:05 AM
Exidor:I've been reading there on & off for ages. I'll get to adding but have the same time issues I do here.
C.King - 11/23/2016 8:55 PM
Great, GAV. If I can't update, don't be discouraged. Also transplanted by GIJOe episode from Chyoo to here.



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