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Elsewhere...

by DeMonic
Storyline Weird New World “Heros”!?
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Previous Chapter Cap becomes...of no...this isn't possible...

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Sue groaned; her brain felt stretched and dry, the inside of her eyelids like sandpaper.

“What the F*UK was I drinking last night” she rumbled in a husky, coarse sounding voice. Gingerly she pulled herself vertical and looked around through bleary eyes...only to realise she had no clue where she was.

She’d been laying on a battered steel work bench, pushed up against the wall of what looked like the cellar of a large tenement building; the room was grimy and cold, filled with work surfaces like the one she was sitting on, which in turn where covered by an haphazard mix of equipment, some of it straight out of a Meth Lab, the rest looking like it had been looted out of Doctor Frankenstein’s.

Sue moved to rub her face, but froze, her hand hovering in front of her face...or was it her hand? The callused paw in front of her LOOKED like her hand and responded to her...but something was wrong.

Lurching to her feet she staggered over to the metal fronted freezer, which sat across the way, using it’s pitted front as an impromptu mirror.

Looking back at her was a woman with a harsh, almost masculine face framed by a mane of red hair; her bare arms where corded with thick muscle as where her legs, a fact that was clearly visible thanks to her skin tight leather trousers, while her meaty tits strained against the red laces of her open fronted, yellow leather jerkin, it’s shade matching that of her pants.

On reach arm she wore metallic wristbands, with razor sharp blades mounted on top and a small housing on the bottom...and as her eyes settled on these everything snapped into place.

She HAD been Sue Richards, The Invisible Woman...NOW she was Sue PHELPS, Hellrazor...


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solddate - 7/28/2014 9:05 AM
>Blue Man - Always nice to see Harley having a positive effect on writing trends. Very nice work, btw.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 4:11 PM
Wow, @Blue_man, so good and so hot! Loved the way you gave the sorceress some personality and her nice mummudrai surprise! And now I need your Tumblr recs ;)
gothamalleyviper - 7/27/2014 1:02 PM
@Colleem, put it in Message board and I will post any thoughts for you.
LesLes - 7/27/2014 12:23 PM
@colleem: post it on the messageboard and I'm sure someone will take a look?
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colleem - 7/27/2014 3:58 AM
Would someone be so kind and look over my chapter? Will write one soon but english isnt my native
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 3:19 PM
Great chapter, MacroLass. Thanks for adding. Check the message board.
MacroLass - 7/23/2014 12:42 PM
Ask and ye shall receive. I just wrote a new chapter.
ESchorcho - 7/23/2014 11:46 AM
MacroLass, are you interested in continuing the X-Men Stepford storyline? Was just wondering where you were going to go with the Gambit part.
exidor455 - 7/23/2014 10:09 AM
Thanks ESchorcho! Feel free to chip in with any ideas and/or chapters! :)



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