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Betty Cooper stared down at herself in shock.
She'd arrived at Dilton's place, since they'd agreed to work on a science project together, but he wasn't around. Then she'd tripped, smacked against one of Dilton's weird machines, and there was a flash of light... and now here she was.
Betty stared down at her ripped clothes. She'd gained almost two feet of height and a whole amount of muscle. Now her body would put Big Moose to shame. She still kept her breasts, in fact they were now a lot bigger, but everything else about her body was like
that of some intense body-builder.
Betty should have been horrified, disgusted, but she was really turned on.
She stroked her thick throbbing muscles. They felt so good, so powerful, so intense.
She imagined herself striding up to Veronica or Cheryl or one of the other bitches who always thought they were better than Betty, squeezing their pretty little bodies like play-doh, and making them lick her out.
Betty moaned as one heavy hand snacked down to her dripping crotch. Fuck, that was so hot.
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XFAN - 3/7/2014 5:11 PM
I'm aware of the differences, including Uranus/Neptune not being cousins, I honestly used the Americanized name because Lita is easier to type a dozen times. Ami is phonetically the same in both versions so it wasn't obvious.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:36 PM
However, it is your story, so you can do what you want. I just thought I should at least let you know.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:34 PM
One other thing. When (or even if you plan to use them), Haruka/Uranus and Neptune/Michiru are NOT cousins. In fact they are a lesbian couple! Wasn't sure if you knew that or not. But thought you might have fun with a chapter with them.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:32 PM
For the others; Venus is Minako, Moon is Usagi, Mars is Rei, Saturn is Hotaru, Chibi Moon is Chibi-Usa, Uranus is Haruka, Neptune is Michiru, and Pluto is Setsuna.
Sailor Mercury - 3/7/2014 4:29 PM
Love the new chapter, but I only have 1 problem with it. That is, that you used Jupiter's Americanized name. He original Japanese name is Makoto.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:36 AM
Will do, thanks for letting me know.
C.King - 3/7/2014 10:32 AM
Grimmer. The wall is for quick non-permanent communication. For longer and permanent, like hashing out stories, use the message board.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:19 AM
C. King, one more thing since I can't seem to get the hang of PM's for this site. Anyway, I'm in this till the end of the story if you're up for it.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
Basically have the story end with Diana, Bruce, and their harem happy and content with the Master PC vanishing to another universe once it's work is done.
Grimmer - 3/7/2014 10:01 AM
I don't want Diana to be too corrupted by the Master PC, just a general lowering of what inhibitions she has. Maybe have some guilt that Bruce helps her overcome as they near the end of their harem building.
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